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"Human" Touch
tell me
would you not jump
only slightly
at the nearly invisible
touch of silk
when all you've ever felt
was the unforgiving
scraping of concrete at your knees?
would you not jump
only slightly
at the nearly invisible
touch of silk
when all you've ever felt
was the unforgiving
scraping of concrete at your knees?
Published 2nd Jun 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
2nd Jun 2019 00:43am
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
2nd Jun 2019 2:29am
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2nd Jun 2019 2:40pm
I'm reading it as 'even the slightest touch of silk is enough to make one jump' - (by contrast to scraped knees on concrete where even a light touch is pretty rough).
Whichever, I agree with your sentiments - I love it too.
Whichever, I agree with your sentiments - I love it too.
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
2nd Jun 2019 2:42pm
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3rd Jun 2019 2:33pm
You guys are flattering me too much! ;) Doesn't matter how you interpret it, as long as it makes you feel something. That's the whole point.
Thank you for the love.
Delanee.
Thank you for the love.
Delanee.
3rd Jun 2019 1:57pm
3rd Jun 2019 2:33pm
