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Anger
Nothing But a Maker
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Nothing But a Maker
you may have shot me
into existence
but that does not
make you my God
Written by
delanee
Published
3rd Jun 2019
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Author's Note
Just a short poem dedicated to father dearest.
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#anger
#disappointment
#family
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Re. Nothing But a Maker
EpicUtester69
(Just a simple poet)
3rd Jun 2019 10:14am
Short and sweet loved it 🤗
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Re: Re. Nothing But a Maker
delanee
3rd Jun 2019 10:17am
Thank you! It's my trademark, it seems. Also, major thanks for the RL.
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
3rd Jun 2019 10:31am
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Re: Re. Nothing But a Maker
delanee
3rd Jun 2019 10:41am
Absolutely, you know it.
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Re. Nothing But a Maker
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
3rd Jun 2019 1:54pm
This is the shortest epic I've ever read - beats Tolkien any day :))
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Re: Re. Nothing But a Maker
delanee
3rd Jun 2019 2:35pm
How sweet of you, Josh. Though I would not dare to defy Tolkien with this piece. It means a lot... ;)
Thank you!
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
3rd Jun 2019 8:20pm
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Re: Re. Nothing But a Maker
delanee
3rd Jun 2019 8:25pm
As short and sweet as this poem. Thank you, HF for your enthusiasm every time.
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Re. Nothing But a Maker
Solomon_Song
19th Jan 2021 6:33am
Words some of us may have wished we said to our parents when they were at their most frustrating to us.
'You may have shot me into existence'....has a graphic ring to it, a put-down to get to father's manhood.
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