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girl crush
slash and burn me on your altar of pyre
I fucking ache with the want of you
rank and vile I spill my guts
all to appease you...my deity of disaster
your crooked smile turns me on
narcissism the god to whom you pray
a nihilist I don't even rate on your scale as human
a cockroach scurrying around on your table
you look at me with disgust
I smile within myself that you took notice
any other woman better give me due respect
I know a superior being when I see one
fuck me for noticing...I wish I never saw you
shitting on your keyboard while you contemplate--
the best way to take me out metaphorically
kill me now...I would lick the puss from your war wounds
put flowers on my grave
my tombstone marked...feminist girl crush
you out cunt me
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Re. girl crush
27th May 2019 10:18pm
How do you make such a subject and phrases read so cool and poetic?.....oh yea I know ....a natural poetess...
love the dark and light you beam
Jeff
love the dark and light you beam
Jeff
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27th May 2019 10:24pm
aw thank you graciously dearest Jeff your comment brought me smiles...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. girl crush
Anonymous
27th May 2019 10:34pm
No one can outdo you my dear one. You are a living goddess. Beautiful in words and deeds. You are my poetic mistress and I loved you from my first read. No one compares to you. Love and hugs always. J
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Re: Re. girl crush
27th May 2019 10:36pm
aw thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis you are so beautiful to me I deeply appreciate the love you show me...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
27th May 2019 10:38pm
It is due to you, sweet one. Your words hit me so hard from the start and I knew that you were my living legend. ❤️
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27th May 2019 10:40pm
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Anonymous
27th May 2019 10:51pm
❤️
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27th May 2019 10:48pm
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27th May 2019 10:54pm
thank you graciously dearest Liam for such a beautiful comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
28th May 2019 00:21am
Good lawwwwwd my love - dare I ask where the inspiration for this came from?
For starters, no one can out cunt you - not if they gave you reason for her to open up to begin with, lol...
Love the pic - she actually looks like my sons beautiful ex...😆
I love you...
Love always - Taryn 🌻❤️🌻
For starters, no one can out cunt you - not if they gave you reason for her to open up to begin with, lol...
Love the pic - she actually looks like my sons beautiful ex...😆
I love you...
Love always - Taryn 🌻❤️🌻
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Re: Re. girl crush
28th May 2019 00:30am
thank you graciously my love it's just a poetic crush... giggles I'm so happy you liked this...
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹💕🌹💕
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹💕🌹💕
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28th May 2019 1:31am
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Re: Re. girl crush
28th May 2019 1:33am
thank you dearest HF I envisioned myself a cockroach scuttling across her keyboard lol such a Goddess she is to me... I know I'm strange... I deeply appreciate the love you show me...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. girl crush
28th May 2019 3:25am
Rich, and darkly seductive Brenda! From a dark poet to a dark poetess, this was a pleasure to read!
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. girl crush
29th May 2019 6:04am
thank you graciously dearest Daniel I'm so pleased you found this darkly seductive...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. girl crush
28th May 2019 7:20am
lets make a threesome
to start with of course , then i can bring in mine ....
this is fucking smooth and hot as hell
to start with of course , then i can bring in mine ....
this is fucking smooth and hot as hell
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Re: Re. girl crush
29th May 2019 6:03am
I'm happy you liked this beautiful Anna a threesome giggles hmm...thank you for such a sexy comment...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. girl crush
28th May 2019 8:41am
Oh my god, this was good. I realized what it is I like so much about your poems, and it's that while you read them, you never know where the next line is going to take you.
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Re: Re. girl crush
29th May 2019 6:05am
thank you most graciously for the love on this write I deeply appreciate it...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. girl crush
28th May 2019 12:44pm
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29th May 2019 6:06am
Re. girl crush
Anonymous
28th May 2019 5:01pm
Fuck...I don't even know where to go with this one. Somebody done twisted your panties, by the sound of it. Though I can't imagine anyone looking at you in disgust. I'm guessing it's a front. Fierce write here, for some unknown crush. I love you, Dark Angel
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. girl crush
29th May 2019 6:07am
giggles thank you beautiful Willow twisted panties indeed lol...
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹❤🌹
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹❤🌹
Re. girl crush
28th May 2019 9:06pm
"My deity of disaster." One detail in a poem that balances divinity and grotesquery so well. Excellent work, Brenda!
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Re: Re. girl crush
29th May 2019 6:07am
thank you graciously dearest Thomas for the love on this write...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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29th May 2019 9:27pm
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29th May 2019 9:28pm