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Sea Of Love
Allow me to narrate my love upon your
iron seat. Shhh, .... just the impassioned cries of surrender, no spoken words need be conveyed. Lay your head and thoughts to rest between my cusping palms, grant me this war to wage for us. As I deftly feel each burden and desire cast forth in reflection, your mind is mine to cipher and conquer. My every heart string is in offering, to lace with yours; a mosaic of dulcet songs, can they sing to a united flutter. Eye to eye, and lips to lips; we'll meet soul to soul, as you greet the depths of my seismic sea;
.....my love spilling upon your iron seat.
Published 26th May 2019
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26th May 2019 4:36am
27th May 2019 3:50am
26th May 2019 4:38am
beautiful Pandora beautifully and deeply erotic
mmm deliciously hot spill...
love Brenda 💕❤💕❤
mmm deliciously hot spill...
love Brenda 💕❤💕❤
27th May 2019 3:50am
26th May 2019 4:42am
Mmm... you naught naughty poetess, representing passion in all its naked glory, what beautiful spill
27th May 2019 3:52am
Thank you for the kindness, SweetKittyCat... I'm so far behind here & need to come check you out!!
27th May 2019 4:11am
26th May 2019 5:21am
Pure beauty, the title has me singing Robert Plant and The Honeydrippers...do you remember??
https://youtu.be/2BoUzzFXuVU
https://youtu.be/2BoUzzFXuVU
27th May 2019 3:54am
Thanks, Tim. It's nice to see you grace my page again!! I just looked it up & remember now.. the good ole 80's!!
26th May 2019 5:42am
Hot Gorgeous spill laced with intimacy
" Eye to eye, and lips to lips; we'll meet soul to soul, " <<<<----- Love this!
This spill got me breathing aloud.......... **whew!**
" Eye to eye, and lips to lips; we'll meet soul to soul, " <<<<----- Love this!
This spill got me breathing aloud.......... **whew!**
27th May 2019 3:56am
Thank you for the loveliest comment & I'm gracious you love my favorite part too. I'm glad you stopped by to see me!!
26th May 2019 6:10am
27th May 2019 3:57am
26th May 2019 6:26am
27th May 2019 3:59am
Oooh, I got a "zzzzzzzzzzzzst" out of you too...thank you so much. I hope life is evening out for you. Hugs!!
Sensuous read, tender loving scene. "my love spilling upon your iron seat" - you;'re well away! Might agree with laughter about JustTim's comment!
This has inspired a poem called Spilling I will post on this page.
This has inspired a poem called Spilling I will post on this page.
27th May 2019 4:02am
Thanks for the love, Solomon. I get soooo happy when one of my pics or words can inspire..I can't wait to read it!
26th May 2019 7:43am
27th May 2019 4:04am
Thank you sweetness!😁 Can't wait for more devilish words to pop up....
27th May 2019 7:14am
27th May 2019 10:28pm
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26th May 2019 9:57am
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27th May 2019 4:06am
Your comment warmed me & coming from such a poetic princess, I'll take your take on it!❤
"free form sonnet-esque format" 👌 love it!
"free form sonnet-esque format" 👌 love it!
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27th May 2019 4:07am
27th May 2019 2:21am
27th May 2019 4:08am
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27th May 2019 1:10pm
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27th May 2019 10:29pm
27th May 2019 8:43pm
you give life to so many
who have perhaps no wife
else they are seeking a fresh lease of life
I am still holding on to my seat
...................................>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.
who have perhaps no wife
else they are seeking a fresh lease of life
I am still holding on to my seat
...................................>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.
27th May 2019 10:30pm
Anonymous
28th May 2019 00:13am
A titillating erotic spill here, girl (no pun intended)...
“My every heart string is in offering, to lace with yours; a mosaic of dulcet songs, can they sing to a united flutter.” - loved this!!
Xoxo Taryn
“My every heart string is in offering, to lace with yours; a mosaic of dulcet songs, can they sing to a united flutter.” - loved this!!
Xoxo Taryn
28th May 2019 5:22am
Oh, but I love being punny! Giggles. I'm so fortunate you enjoyed it as with anything. Thanks for your support so much!❤
I posted it elsewhere tonight & got comments about the anorexic in the pic, if you call her that. Losers.🙄
I posted it elsewhere tonight & got comments about the anorexic in the pic, if you call her that. Losers.🙄
Anonymous
28th May 2019 4:49pm
Well, damn...I'm at a loss for words with this one. Word one to done it had me holding my breath.Definitely a keeper!
1st Jun 2019 4:55pm
Damn Willow, I'm so grateful for your recognition. Please forgive me that I didn't see it sooner. Thank you!♡
31st May 2019 9:55pm
1st Jun 2019 4:58pm
*curtsies will a huge smile*
Thank you so very much.... I wish I'd have seen this sooner!
Thank you so very much.... I wish I'd have seen this sooner!
6th Jun 2019 00:20am
Your ink must be lava... because this piece is blazin hot PandoraUnleashed
6th Jun 2019 00:49am
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15th Jun 2019 12:10pm
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15th Jun 2019 6:07pm
Thank you, my lovely. It's very much appreciated! I'm glad you stopped by too.🌹
13th Nov 2019 4:47am
Elegant in its erotic petition. There is a beauty here that cannot be denied or pushed away. Such an offering is to be taken with gratitude and without holding back. Your image is one of my favorite poses with which to hold a woman. And your words are a miracle unfolding before my very eyes. ;-)
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
17th Nov 2019 9:37pm
Omgoodness, you're spoiling me with comment love here. I'm forever indebted you took time to go weeding through oldies! Actually, this is by far my favorite to have ever written! I had so many on another site tell me the same, that they closed their eyes while reading.. I love it if I can take ones mind there. I loved the pic too & like often, it inspired the words. Thank you, than you!! Pandy feels utterly blessed today!<3
