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November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
November rains always remind me of you
a serendipitous encounter while the night cried
two women in a lonely bar at the edge of existence
when you looked at me with interest I was shell shocked
there was no beauty in me to be desired
you held me while the storm raged
as my chest thundered its fear at my unbecoming
the hardened woman you met was coming undone
I was a little girl shivering at your touch
you took your time with me
calculating the risks of reaching into my darkness
fearless you spoke to the dark and ordered it back
my lady loves who smelled of danger
you were in your element within my self inflicted torment
because you knew just where it belonged
under your feet and behind us, you would see to it
I was at the edge of disaster when you found me
you didn't see a hard woman careless of heart
you saw the woman I could be in love's embrace
yes beautiful I witnessed you in all your ache
that first night while the skies wept--
your heart lay shattered and cold
I saw the tears, I saw your pain, I saw your flame.
In your raw, exposed eloquence I knew only softness
A woman with no hardened edges, who can yield--
falling into the refuge of the feminine
your eyes silently cry save me, from my self imposed exile
And upon my wings I took you, to fly with me
On a journey with no destination, in timelessness and bliss
peering into my eyes you broke the spell I was under
I thought I could never love another
pain was my Mistress and I served her well
with a tenderness, I never knew you changed all that
I knew you beautiful...yes from the first moment I lay eyes on you
withIn the soft wetness of tears and touch you came unfurled
In the scent of us, your bloom became an oasis for two
The desert of the past refreshed, no longer arid and barren
It was in your pain I was able to come, touch you, hold you
In your surrender, you could see me, hear me, know me
you taught me to laugh at the pain it couldn't hurt me now
you stalked the nights that frightened me
whispered it will be alright lady, just let me hold you
Your hand in mine, your heart within my heart, your love, and mine.
Author's Note
thank you beautiful Sky for creating with me you are so very lovely 💕
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Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
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25th May 2019 2:43pm
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25th May 2019 2:45pm
thank you beautiful Sky it was a real pleasure to create with you... I felt your soul in the beauty of your lines...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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25th May 2019 2:49pm
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25th May 2019 3:00pm
Re: Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 3:02pm
thank you graciously from us both dearest Liam she is a very passionate lady it was a pleasure...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 3:07pm
The world needs more hearts united. I found my heart. Always beautiful to know and hear others feel that said beauty.
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25th May 2019 3:09pm
Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
Anonymous
25th May 2019 3:03pm
When two beautiful ladies get together, fireworks are the results. This is sheer beauty. Wonderful poetry. Well done the both of you, my ladies. ❤️
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Re: Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 3:05pm
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis from us both she put her heart into this and she made it a beautiful experience I'm happy it spoke to you 😊
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 3:25pm
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25th May 2019 3:27pm
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25th May 2019 3:26pm
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Re: Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 3:29pm
thank you graciously dearest HF from us both for the love on this write... she is truly a beautiful poetess and a joy to write with...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 3:33pm
I love how this borders on the edge of erotic
but stops and is sensitive, sensual and Gorgeously kind
but stops and is sensitive, sensual and Gorgeously kind
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Re: Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 3:35pm
thank you graciously dearest Tallen from us both for the love on this write I wanted something soft and loving and she really came through so very beautifully... she is a real pleasure to write with...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 3:44pm
Such a vulnerable beauty created by two soft-spoken but honest voices. A true delight to read. Who could not be inspired?
Delanee.
Delanee.
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Re: Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
thank you graciously beautiful Delanee from us both...she brought out my softer side...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 3:49pm
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25th May 2019 3:50pm
Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 5:09pm
Crimsin you have been submitting some touching pieces lately, ones I and I'm sure many can personally relate to. Plus with a collaboration with the talented skydancer makes it even more profound! Bravo the both of you!
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Re: Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 5:20pm
thank you most graciously dearest Gothicsurreal One that means a lot to me I was starting to doubt my ability to connect with the reader... Sky_dancer added so much beauty here she was a real joy to write with...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts here...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate your thoughts here...
love Brenda 💕
Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 9:48pm
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25th May 2019 10:23pm
Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 10:50pm
There is a wonderful medley of emotions in this write that are mixed in such real humanity. Beautiful work. You rarely see such synchronicity in a collaboration.
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Re: Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
25th May 2019 10:59pm
thank you graciously dearest Daniel from us both for the love on this write it was a real pleasure writing with her...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
Anonymous
26th May 2019 2:16pm
ohhhhhhhhhh my stars & garters, you two
this is a gorgeously sensual meeting of two talents... you read as one stunning voice.
absolutely love it
this is a gorgeously sensual meeting of two talents... you read as one stunning voice.
absolutely love it
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Re: Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
26th May 2019 3:02pm
aw thank you beautiful one from us both I'm so happy to see you 🌹 you brightened my day...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
27th May 2019 2:24am
Crim, I added skys to give her some RL love. I'd commented on hers but forgot to on yours.
"In the scent of us, your bloom became an oasis for two "
Was hawt as hell, crank it up higher you two!
"In the scent of us, your bloom became an oasis for two "
Was hawt as hell, crank it up higher you two!
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Re. November's Heart~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
28th May 2019 5:32am