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The Heart's Direction

this part of the story is going to be incredibly sad
all because this heart of mine took a chance
on someone who wasn't worth the gamble
�
people tell me to listen to my heart �
let it guide me �
don't they realize my heart is a coward �
and therefore so am I?

Written by delanee

Published 24th May 2019 | Edited 26th May 2019

#anxiety #heartbroken #UnrequitedLove

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Anonymous

- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am

24th May 2019 2:17pm

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delanee

26th May 2019 11:47am

I need to thank you for your honest and helpful input. Without changing my voice and the way I like to write, you came up with some good suggestions.

I like the way it looks and sounds now... Keep on being honest, HF! It's very much appreciated!
This was truthfully one of my poems I felt stuck with, so I was glad someone offered help.

Delanee.