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Foreplay
It didn't really matter what I wore
As you ripped it off of me in aggressive shreds
Took me by my hands and pushed me up against the wall
Wrapped my legs around your waist as I clawed
The moisture on my skin was no comparison as you thrusted yourself within
Knocking pictures to the floor
Throwing the vase from the foyers tables
Bending me over to hold my braid
Biting on my back until you are empty and I am full within
Foreplay with rage is not a sin
As you ripped it off of me in aggressive shreds
Took me by my hands and pushed me up against the wall
Wrapped my legs around your waist as I clawed
The moisture on my skin was no comparison as you thrusted yourself within
Knocking pictures to the floor
Throwing the vase from the foyers tables
Bending me over to hold my braid
Biting on my back until you are empty and I am full within
Foreplay with rage is not a sin
Written by
Lagertha
(Elizabeth Grace)
Published 24th May 2019
| Edited 27th May 2019
Author's Note
Image by Saatchi~ Grand Foyer
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Foreplay
24th May 2019 9:44am
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27th May 2019 7:38am
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Anonymous
24th May 2019 1:37pm
Absolutely agree: "Foreplay with rage is not a sin". It's hunger. Lovely my dear.
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Agree with you as well my dear Juvenalis. Thank you for your lovely comment and the RL. I do appreciate you.
Re. Foreplay
24th May 2019 5:01pm
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27th May 2019 7:43am
Absolutely agree. For what is the impulses we have to act upon, if not desire.
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27th May 2019 7:45am
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27th May 2019 7:49am
Thank you Absence. Some of our deepest desires may seem sinful. However, I do believe in pushing the limits.
Re: Re. Foreplay
27th May 2019 2:53pm
"I want to stand as close to the edge as I can without going over. Out on the edge you see all the kinds of things you can't see from the center."
--Kurt Vonnegut
--Kurt Vonnegut
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Re. Foreplay
Shades of 'Fatal Attraction' and 'Basic Instinct' in the sexual dynamic.
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27th May 2019 7:52am
I would never want a fatal attraction my dear. Just the basic instinct to claim my desire. Thank you Solomon_Song. I did enjoy those movies though ;)
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Anonymous
27th May 2019 3:00pm
So, after the cold shower that ensued after this ink... I will Say what needs to be said ....
DDDAAAYYYUUMMMM !!!
DDDAAAYYYUUMMMM !!!
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28th May 2019 2:45am
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30th May 2019 6:30am
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30th May 2019 6:48am
Re. Foreplay
31st May 2019 8:36pm
where u two did it
Lord was enjoying
so no sin no sin win -win
do more and god will be happy
no sinners beneath high roofed walls
cum more cum more
Lord was enjoying
so no sin no sin win -win
do more and god will be happy
no sinners beneath high roofed walls
cum more cum more
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Re: Re. Foreplay
3rd Jun 2019 9:19pm
Absolutely loved your comment. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I agree with you. No sin,lol.
Re: Re. Foreplay
4th Jun 2019 2:08am
VERY FEW SHARE MY INTELLIGENCE
HOW HAPPY I am
you do keep cumming
your sinning is benefiting
this cauldron smoked human
half man
half chicken
under covers of darkness
but
LORD HAS EYES
UNLIKE HUMAN
He hasn't sinned
and knows that sex is made by him
wisest one living in heaven
if there is one
HOW HAPPY I am
you do keep cumming
your sinning is benefiting
this cauldron smoked human
half man
half chicken
under covers of darkness
but
LORD HAS EYES
UNLIKE HUMAN
He hasn't sinned
and knows that sex is made by him
wisest one living in heaven
if there is one
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Re. Foreplay
Curious about the pix that went with the poem.
At first I thought the romance was taken place in a church.
Then I read foyer and pictures which placed me in the house.
I felt like I was watching and was hotter then hell!
Well arousal of words.
At first I thought the romance was taken place in a church.
Then I read foyer and pictures which placed me in the house.
I felt like I was watching and was hotter then hell!
Well arousal of words.
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3rd Jun 2019 9:44pm
It's a mirrored foyer by Saatchi gallery. When in the midst of foreplay, I believe mirrors can reflect our true desires, when we see our reflection. Thanks for the read and comment.