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Pulsing In The Deep...
From my sultry hips and thighs, he has me shouting out hallelujah's, and fuck me's, as his tongue slithers its way up. Blanketed beneath hot, heady breath; by way of grazing teeth and lips in suction, he marks his claim. Such the artist, he paints me in shades of red, and upon my divide of ivory, the contrast of his insignia can be read.
Retracing his steps, downward goes his ardent tongue. Cheeks spread, his mouth dips and dives as fingers dance. The pink swirls a whirlwind of desire onto fingertips as he skims a tribute across my naughty lips he knows I'll lick. Entry in; nerves surge as muscles constrict , welcoming his curve of sin within. Every fiber of self is sparked as his veil of veins come pulsing through the deep.
There's no rest for the weary, as raw and willing is the name of his game tonight. He's often like the devil in Heaven's playground, but he knows how to own Pandy's velvet underground!
Published 20th May 2019
Author's Note
I officially feel like I'm back to pulsing in my beloved Deep Underground again. Love you guys 🙏🖤💟
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20th May 2019 8:50am
beautiful Pandora so freaking hot!!!
so happy to have you back pulsing in the underground
pink peeking and escalating your sexiness...
love you lady...
love Brenda 💕
so happy to have you back pulsing in the underground
pink peeking and escalating your sexiness...
love you lady...
love Brenda 💕
20th May 2019 7:54pm
Me too, my beautiful friend. The fire came back out of nowhere, but I'm not questioning it! Thanks for ever encouraging me.💖
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20th May 2019 7:56pm
Heehee.. I love your comment. Thank you, it feels good! I was miserable without you guys....
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20th May 2019 1:59pm
Oh the sizzle is on. That is one sexy piece. Skimming tribute...curve of sin...it appears the playground is open.
Thanks for the encouraging words. It feels so good in the deep!! Indeed the muse is playing again...
Thanks for RL love too.😁
Thanks for RL love too.😁
Anonymous
20th May 2019 2:51pm
Deep within walls that constrict...you deliver a you verses that are "lit"... as a match or the latest term, yeah you dropped this hotness and made my head turn....Yeah, like that!!
20th May 2019 8:01pm
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20th May 2019 3:11pm
Ya know...I kept thinking you weren't posting anymore. Then I saw this one as I was scrolling along and realized somehow I'm not following you! That has been freaking remedied now! I'll be taking this tasty hot treat home with me, if you don't mind. :-)
20th May 2019 8:04pm
I'm humbled for the gift of both add & follow, Willow. Thank you! I did take a depressing hiatus, but damn, I'm back. Yay!
Anonymous
20th May 2019 9:44pm
Good to see you back and all fired up! We have our ups & downs but this place always seems to draw us back...eventually. I know I've taken my step backs as well.
22nd May 2019 3:28pm
It's so odd when it feels like family though. I guess all families need breaks though.♡
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20th May 2019 9:14pm
Hot comeback, like the hidden compliment to Deep Underground. More unleashing ahead?
22nd May 2019 3:27pm
Thanks Solomon. Absolutely! Although, one im working on now, is about the moon 🤔 Much more naughty in store though!
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21st May 2019 2:20am
Gurrrrrl - this is sugar and spice and allllll things nice! Glad to read in your note you’re feeling better! Burnin’ it down, gorgeous! This is hot as hell!
“Entry in; nerves surge as muscles constrict , welcoming his curve of sin within.” - Squeeeeee!!
Xoxo Taryn
“Entry in; nerves surge as muscles constrict , welcoming his curve of sin within.” - Squeeeeee!!
Xoxo Taryn
22nd May 2019 3:33pm
I'm so glad you liked it. Im ever more happy that I'm feeling the fire again! Thanks, sweetness! Xo
21st May 2019 9:13pm
The deep end is always more fun...! : )
Great to have you and your prose back in the caverns.
Great to have you and your prose back in the caverns.
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11th Jul 2019 00:27am
You have delivered another heart stopping breath taking piece, words not just beautifully written but visually can feel it all, volcanic hot, damn I need another shower hehehe beautiful pandora
11th Jul 2019 3:12am
I'm super stoked, you liked it enough to add it. Thank you for the bright light you've shed upon me today!!
13th Nov 2019 4:55am
This very well be one of your most erotically charged poems I've read! That ending was to die for. I felt this in the source of my manhood in a way that makes me hot for the very scene you so superbly laid out for the reader. The image your presented makes a great introduction to the main performance which is your mind-blowing poem.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
17th Nov 2019 9:02pm
I'm stoked to see these words of appreciation as tiny giggles escape my happy smile. I'm glad you enjoyed it. The first 50 came from a 50 word challenge on another site. When my muse shuts down, I try to at least push myself somehow. Then the ending suddenly hit me & I thought hell f'n yes! I'm amazed to see it's had 1,000 views( I believe )...I don't think any of mine have had that many. I'm pleased you enjoyed my naughty ode to the Deep & my velvet Underground.;) xo
20th Mar 2020 10:59am
20th Mar 2020 2:41pm
Indeed. This was my magic moment in the Deep. So much has faded as I've become jaded. Sigh....
