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eternal knowledge of the becoming spirit
beautiful sage you speak mountain fluently
the forests themselves are keeper of your secrets
through hushed lips, you whisper wisdom
my soul answers as if chastised
the fire in yours charges mine
to carefully listen to the urgency of the river
rushing to greet the ocean's tide with the messages it's received
of days burning with the sun then washed and renewed
the forest watches and knows
the mountains vow from chaos will be order
the rivers gush with excitement when meeting the ocean's tide
rich with the news of a becoming spirit
it is the eternal truth who guides
so it is with you and so it is also with I
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16th May 2019 3:24am
Wow Crim.......absolutely soul touching ink......inspiring and gracious.......enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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16th May 2019 3:25am
thank you graciously beautiful Flower love and hugs my purple friend...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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16th May 2019 3:54pm
"beautiful sage you speak mountain fluently"
... love this opening line - made me want to sign up for a course on learning mountain language.
Love the rest of it too.
... love this opening line - made me want to sign up for a course on learning mountain language.
Love the rest of it too.
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Re: Re. eternal knowledge of the becoming spirit
16th May 2019 3:59pm
smiles thank you dearest Josh but knowing you I think you speak mountain already 😉
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. eternal knowledge of the becoming spirit
17th May 2019 5:34pm
Yes, 'the forest watches and knows'!
A wonderful, heart-touching and soothing poem, Crimsin!
A wonderful, heart-touching and soothing poem, Crimsin!
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Re: Re. eternal knowledge of the becoming spirit
18th May 2019 2:58am
thank you graciously beautiful Sappho for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕