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Me, Myself, and I
We piece together random fragments, frayed
snippets, distorted slots of memory,
insisting on ‘what happened’ - a collage
of bits n’ bobs flitting in a neural
network, synapses pinging hither and
thither, part rail-road programmed, partly lost
in the sequence of events. Grandma died -
when was it? Before or after the pound
crashed against the Euro? Cells constantly
die; new ones are born. And so it goes on.
Fashions in psychology demand we
nail it down, take command, seize the day. But
why capitulate to this vain crisis
of identity? We are consciousness
forever moving, shifting, changing; a
river, never the same when stepped in twice.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 10th May 2019
| Edited 9th Mar 2024
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(photo credit: Joshua Bond)
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Re. Me, Myself and I
10th May 2019 7:04pm
I Love this, Josh.
What is that old saying, "Don't judge me for who I was yesterday; I've grown since then."
What is that old saying, "Don't judge me for who I was yesterday; I've grown since then."
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Re: Re. Me, Myself and I
10th May 2019 9:07pm
Thank you Ahavati, and for the RL. Not heard that quote before but it certainly rings true - and complements the poem nicely, thank you. It's just reminded me of Richard Branson's driving mantra in his charitable work in prison reform "never judge a person by their worst moment".
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Re: Re. Me, Myself and I
10th May 2019 9:22pm
Thank you caffeinated_dejavua for reading and commenting; and for the RL. Glad it struck a chord with you.
I enjoyed reading through your poems too; they have an strong edge combined with a wide range of alliterative vocabulary which somehow catapults them into one's mind to be read over and again. And welcome to DUP. Josh.
I enjoyed reading through your poems too; they have an strong edge combined with a wide range of alliterative vocabulary which somehow catapults them into one's mind to be read over and again. And welcome to DUP. Josh.
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Re: Re. Me, Myself and I
11th May 2019 9:18pm
Thank you for the encouragement. I hope you find DUP an instructive and interesting place to investigate.
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10th May 2019 7:15pm
Re: Re. Me, Myself and I
10th May 2019 9:25pm
Thank you Brenda for visiting; I guess being continually changing beings, it opens up hope for greater understanding of ourselves and others.
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10th May 2019 7:20pm
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10th May 2019 9:26pm
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Re: Re. Me, Myself and I
10th May 2019 9:29pm
Thank you hrshykss, and for the RL. I hope we can evolve fast enough to remain sufficiently compos mentis in this fast-changing cognitive-dissonance inducing world.
Re. Me, Myself and I
10th May 2019 8:30pm
If we are not growing
we are either dead or living in a mental institution
Love the spill, Brother
we are either dead or living in a mental institution
Love the spill, Brother
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Re: Re. Me, Myself and I
10th May 2019 9:30pm
Thank you Tallen. There's no standing still, that's for sure. Have a good week-end. Josh.
Re. Me, Myself and I
10th May 2019 9:16pm
Well written. It's hard to express constant flux of the self, but you've done well.
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Re: Re. Me, Myself and I
10th May 2019 9:57pm
Thank you Tardegrade for reading and commenting so supportively. I've just been reading some of your poems for the first time and find them intriguing and with a kind of humble depth. Will go back and read some more now :))
Re. Me, Myself and I
myself, I've never sure
if we're mere consciousness
or something much more
deeply superficial .. :)
if we're mere consciousness
or something much more
deeply superficial .. :)
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Re: Re. Me, Myself and I
11th May 2019 2:58pm
Thanks for reading & commenting again, Paul.
"more deeply superficial"
... now that's a phrase to get my head around this afternoon whilst chopping some wood ready for next winter.
"more deeply superficial"
... now that's a phrase to get my head around this afternoon whilst chopping some wood ready for next winter.
Re. Me, Myself and I
11th May 2019 00:14am
A thoughtful spill Josh. We are constantly changing, ever growing with time.
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Re: Re. Me, Myself and I
Thank you Summer; and for the RL again. I'm guessing we couldn't stand still even if we wanted to.
Re. Me, Myself and I
11th May 2019 3:18am
Bravo, Josh,
most insightful, this is...
and on the money too
were we not in constant flux
I believe we'd all be dead...
most insightful, this is...
and on the money too
were we not in constant flux
I believe we'd all be dead...
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11th May 2019 3:00pm
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11th May 2019 11:14am
Re: Re. Me, Myself and I
11th May 2019 3:03pm
Everything goes in fashions - psychology, dentistry, poetry - maybe even the law? :))
Re. Me, Myself and I
11th May 2019 5:29pm
Really enjoyed this .. we are but a ripple, growing hopefully, expanding, changing, and always moving ... I think whether we like it or not .. :)
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Re: Re. Me, Myself and I
Hi Jemac, thank you for the read, and RL, again. Glad you enjoyed it. I'm reckoning flux and transformation is what constitutes life itself. I guess we need to get used to "The Wisdom of Insecurity" (Alan Watt's book) of continous movement. Trying to nail 'life' is like trying to nail jello to the wall. :))
Re. Me, Myself and I
12th May 2019 4:17am
There is a wonderful emergence enlightenment here, it's almost like an out of body experience, looking at the way who and what we are, and why we are here.
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12th May 2019 1:26pm