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I Traipse Across Your Page
I traipse across your page
dining on the inflection amid reflection
and amorous dalliance
diluting my soul ever slowly
dipping my fingers in you
the scent of sentiment
I'm not like the bee, the butterflies
or the bear searching for honey
I'm a string
strung out for all to see
wrapping the bits around my finger
each loop a perfect memory
meant to last a lifetime
dip me in holy waters
cross my heart and kiss my sky
there's no fraying or temptation
just freedom in the feeling
I shall wander in your eye
dining on the inflection amid reflection
and amorous dalliance
diluting my soul ever slowly
dipping my fingers in you
the scent of sentiment
I'm not like the bee, the butterflies
or the bear searching for honey
I'm a string
strung out for all to see
wrapping the bits around my finger
each loop a perfect memory
meant to last a lifetime
dip me in holy waters
cross my heart and kiss my sky
there's no fraying or temptation
just freedom in the feeling
I shall wander in your eye
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Re. I Traipse Across Your Page
9th May 2019 6:37pm
" I'm not like the bee, the butterflies
or the bear searching for honey
I'm a string
strung out for all to see
wrapping the bits around my finger
each loop a perfect memory
meant to last a lifetime " <<<<----------------Super lines and message, Brother!!
Love this romantic thought!
or the bear searching for honey
I'm a string
strung out for all to see
wrapping the bits around my finger
each loop a perfect memory
meant to last a lifetime " <<<<----------------Super lines and message, Brother!!
Love this romantic thought!
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9th May 2019 6:41pm
Re. I Traipse Across Your Page
9th May 2019 6:48pm
dearest Tim I'm witnessing a new passion in you
the likes I've never seen before...
I have to confess I'm a little envious...
singeing write...
it burns its lust...
love Brenda ❤
the likes I've never seen before...
I have to confess I'm a little envious...
singeing write...
it burns its lust...
love Brenda ❤
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9th May 2019 6:52pm
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9th May 2019 6:54pm
Re. I Traipse Across Your Page
9th May 2019 7:13pm
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Anonymous
9th May 2019 8:04pm
I'm not like the bee, the butterflies
or the bear searching for honey
I`m just a man looking to sting love,
invoke a chaotic flutter and to wake
her from a hibernation; to dissolve
her bitter so she can savor the sweet ~
muse enhanced...oh, luv❤
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9th May 2019 8:12pm
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Anonymous
9th May 2019 8:17pm
keep blushing, baby😘
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
9th May 2019 9:42pm
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9th May 2019 9:44pm
Re. I Traipse Across Your Page
9th May 2019 10:23pm
Excellent wording, JusTim, particularly that last line. You wander in my eye, and stay within my mind.
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9th May 2019 10:30pm
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9th May 2019 11:12pm
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10th May 2019 1:13am
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Anonymous
14th May 2019 1:40pm
Well, now, isn’t this incredibly beautiful. Your romantic side always breathes beautifully. That last stanza…wow! Nicely done, my friend
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