Hate and love

in reference to a video i received about a year ago.
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Terse poem..there feels like something is missing. I like it, I do! There is needs to be more..depth, more passion. Reworks the words, pack a punch! It's the Bible, and a love story (an epic ode to span the ages?) If you can see it and it makes you believe - how? Why? Make the poem speak more. At it is, it is a very good piece. Refined, it could be astounding.

Maybe it will be.....in time it will be edited....I can't write it alone.

Can you explain, please?

Reads like an intriguing 'elevator pitch'; leaves the reader wanting to know more - but maybe that's the best way to leave it. If the reader is 'sparked', they have a 'take-home' gift from the poem - which is one of the purposes of poetry. Welcome to DUP, Josh.

interesting to  me,, meaning that after reading the poem,,, i read the poem in  away that i can gain some thing from it one way or another,, it's strictly up to me to reach in and take what i need and apply it to my own life in some way,,((((  simple,, when ever one is trying to focus on things in their life, we learn to first sit down and think it through,,  as we all know we come to a point that we  learn to pick and choose what fits us best in everything we do and simply set aside what doesn't til another time... same saying from your work here,, """hate and love"''''   every reader will get a different meaning from it,, that is why i think it's interesting,,, great job