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Blockage
The breakage of the mold
Change daunting
As I compose these lines
A shortage of ideas
Lacking in my peers' grace
The finesse in their writes
I may stumble now
Lacking in much style
But I cannot exist in silence
As frustration grows
So here I do provide
One more feather from my wing.
Change daunting
As I compose these lines
A shortage of ideas
Lacking in my peers' grace
The finesse in their writes
I may stumble now
Lacking in much style
But I cannot exist in silence
As frustration grows
So here I do provide
One more feather from my wing.
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29th Apr 2019 8:27pm
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Re: Re. Blockage
29th Apr 2019 8:31pm
Thank you for the kind words and support, my friend. I will try to deserve them.
Re. Blockage
29th Apr 2019 8:42pm
Re: Re. Blockage
29th Apr 2019 8:48pm
Thank you, Rjm. Sorry that you're familiar with feeling. I suppose we all are, now and then.
Re. Blockage
29th Apr 2019 9:13pm
'Blockage' has some affinity with feeling in state of 'wreckage, breakage and leakage' - all kind of 'down'-words
However 'Feather' has some affinity with 'heather, leather, breather and clever' - all kind of more 'up'-words.
And I think your wings carry many more of the 'feather' types :))
However 'Feather' has some affinity with 'heather, leather, breather and clever' - all kind of more 'up'-words.
And I think your wings carry many more of the 'feather' types :))
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Re: Re. Blockage
29th Apr 2019 10:26pm
A very kind and clever comment, Josh. This coming from a man I admire. Thank you so much!
Re. Blockage
Anonymous
29th Apr 2019 10:38pm
you need to kick that
block in its ass, sir Crow.
You need to show
who`s King of the perch!
*love this, btw, particularly
that last verse*

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Re: Re. Blockage
29th Apr 2019 10:43pm
Re. Blockage
Anonymous
30th Apr 2019 00:01am
If I could use words like you do when you say that your muse is down, I'd believe I'd be truly a poet. My friend you don't know how gifted you are. Great write as always.

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Re. Blockage
30th Apr 2019 3:32am
Yes, writers block isn’t fun to navigate !
Hopefully, it’s a short term thing... 🌹
Hopefully, it’s a short term thing... 🌹
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Re. Blockage
30th Apr 2019 8:41pm
We can relate here, but we all get through it
A change of scenery might help
A change of scenery might help
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Re. Blockage
2nd May 2019 1:52pm
aw dearest Thomas you have a style that is uniquely your own
not another like you...
I love this...
love Brenda 🌹
not another like you...
I love this...
love Brenda 🌹
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Re. Blockage
20th May 2019 8:25pm
I miss your words crow. I hate to see this..forgive me as I was away myself...wordless. big hugs 🖤
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