Wisps of a Wish

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Lovely write ... Many times I set out to write and after even the first line ... I go along for the ride ... The mind has its way if you let it ... Bless and love ...

Thank you, FeNyx! I appreciate your comment, as always x

I love the way they're painted to be in this place of peace but they both seem to have a lot of internal struggle going on. And knowing that the other person sat "in the middle of the seeds" it makes me think they'll overcome the problem they're facing, or at least they have the potential to blossom after they've gone through it. I did expect it to go somewhere else, maybe to a darker place, but I think this was actually exactly what I needed to read right now haha- I've had some emotions returning too that kind of feel like zombies in a graveyard coming after me, and I overcame them earlier today but this poem was like a reminder that we can always return from the darkness and that any hopelessness that lives within us might be mitigated by remembering that there's someone we know who wishes us well :) Thank you for sharing your poem, I truly enjoyed reading it and thinking on it! I hope you're doing okay with the resurfacing emotions. I feel like everyone here can relate to that because so many of us find comfort in writing it and reading it. We're here for you and your beautiful words as well xx

Thank you so so much! You're too kind! I love your interpretation of it. A lot of poems I write, I come to figure out later are about my mom and the state of our relationship, which at this point doesn't really exist. I'm okay with it but sometimes there's this feeling of wishing things had been different growing up. So even if I can't change the past, it's comforting to know that I can write something expressing in my own words how that feels and have people that can relate to it. There's always hope but only if you want there to be. Thank you so much for the read and comment, I appreciate it more than you know x I also hope you're doing well with the emotions that have resurfaced for you as well

Made me feel that the person needed help, but kept it internalized.  You know something is off but they won't let you help.

That's true all too often, however, as I've found, you can't help someone that doesn't want to help themselves unfortunately. Thank you for taking the time to read & comment x

There is the tenderness of a deep and complex relationship beneath your lilting rhymes, depths beneath the sunlight and fragrance of flowers. I found this intriguing.

Daniel

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Still be my heart! I think it turned out wonderful. You expressed, very well, the isolation in such a situation & how that one act..a simple one, can make an impact.  (I'm assuming or wishing it did in my mind atleast). I've been in those moments many times, myself. Great work!

Thank you so much for your insight! And thank you for the kind comment & read x

This found me on the edge of tears.  I'm not certain what You were after here
but as it is it's very tender with hints of sensuality.

Beautiful Spill

However it makes each person feel after reading it is exactly what I was after ha ha I appreciate the read and kind comment x

Such a sweet, somber write. I love it <3

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Makes one want to blow for a wish. A sad piece but one that I hope can bring hope. It's certainly a reflective one.

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem enough to add it to your reading list, it means a lot x

Thank you so much for the read & kind comment
I appreciate it x