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passion?
some kisses
are forever
in the making
i don't know
whether
it is the anticipation
or the deprivation
of
what was supposed to be
but wasn't
forever
till that moment
lust
is for the needy
passion
perhaps that adhesive
that binding force
that defies matter
what matters
what truly matters
is now
the moment
of impact
..
Published 30th Mar 2019
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30th Mar 2019 11:47pm
Yes! This moment! You've waited all your life tasting the contrast in order for this moment of perfect recognition of bliss.
:-)
welcome is the Artist Admired
Welcome!
is the Friend, kind and generous!
and Wise!
beyond words
my appreciation dear Sage One!
honored and humbled!
well...indeed the bliss...
welcome is the Artist Admired
Welcome!
is the Friend, kind and generous!
and Wise!
beyond words
my appreciation dear Sage One!
honored and humbled!
well...indeed the bliss...
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
31st Mar 2019 00:51am
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1st Apr 2019 1:03pm
welcome
is the Friend Admired
welcome
is the artist! kind and generous
yes..will be etched on soul for sure!
is the Friend Admired
welcome
is the artist! kind and generous
yes..will be etched on soul for sure!
31st Mar 2019 2:28am
1st Apr 2019 1:04pm
31st Mar 2019 3:29am
1st Apr 2019 1:06pm
absolutely my Friend!
many more ways than one...that moment..of impact!
welcome and appreciate immensely bro
your presence and insight
many more ways than one...that moment..of impact!
welcome and appreciate immensely bro
your presence and insight
Anonymous
31st Mar 2019 4:29am
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1st Apr 2019 1:07pm
hahaha.. don't know about the king or anything dear Friend...
you're way up there when it comes to generosity!
welcome your presence and generosity!
it is humbling!
beyond words the appreciation
of both
you're way up there when it comes to generosity!
welcome your presence and generosity!
it is humbling!
beyond words the appreciation
of both
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
31st Mar 2019 11:08am
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31st Mar 2019 3:28pm
Nicely put cold_fusion. I guess passion continues after lust moves on - and both have their place in a richer human life.
31st Mar 2019 4:25pm
When the lust and passion are shared by the same people, then you have something very special and worth nurturing forever.
Anonymous
25th Jun 2019 9:47am
Well worded and well presented (concrete poetry is an under-rated device, I think). Your thoughts on passion and lust are (imho) on point....just like the difference between love and sex... without love, sex can be just "friction" that ends in emptiness. Again, a very good write!
25th Jun 2019 11:11am
