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A Slave to His Mistress
I have surrendered to you absolutely,
Given myself complete and whole,
I have given you my mind and body,
But then you also took my soul.
You have broken the essence of my being,
To shards and pieces spread about the dust,
Then molded me into a creation,
Solely for your pleasure and for your lust.
You have taken everything out of me,
You plucked my logic again and again,
That when I crave for desecration,
I welcome the punishment.
You break and make my spirit,
When the void you fill is just as much
As when the words fail me you flail me,
That my flesh welcomes your touch.
This goes beyond all worship and adoration,
When your commands are the breaths I need,
And I know I’m not worthy of this servitude,
When you drink the tears I bleed.
Given myself complete and whole,
I have given you my mind and body,
But then you also took my soul.
You have broken the essence of my being,
To shards and pieces spread about the dust,
Then molded me into a creation,
Solely for your pleasure and for your lust.
You have taken everything out of me,
You plucked my logic again and again,
That when I crave for desecration,
I welcome the punishment.
You break and make my spirit,
When the void you fill is just as much
As when the words fail me you flail me,
That my flesh welcomes your touch.
This goes beyond all worship and adoration,
When your commands are the breaths I need,
And I know I’m not worthy of this servitude,
When you drink the tears I bleed.
Written by
wallyroo92
Published 27th Mar 2019
| Edited 26th Nov 2020
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Re. A Slave to his Mistress
28th Mar 2019 00:27am
Re. A Slave to his Mistress
28th Mar 2019 1:34pm
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Re. A Slave to his Mistress
30th Oct 2020 2:36am
Hi wallyroo92!
I loved your poem and Mistress too. I was wondering if I could publish it on my submissive profile for my Mistress if you don't mind. I would like to give you credit, if you let me do it, what name should I use?
I loved your poem and Mistress too. I was wondering if I could publish it on my submissive profile for my Mistress if you don't mind. I would like to give you credit, if you let me do it, what name should I use?
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11th Nov 2020 5:19am
Re. A Slave to his Mistress
7th Nov 2020 4:37am
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11th Nov 2020 5:19am
Re. A Slave to His Mistress
Whew!! .... Wow, Walter! I can't remember if I've heard your voice before, so this was quite an introduction to it, to say the least.. ;). I was captivated by this extremely well crafted piece of submission. I really enjoyed those last lines...
"This goes beyond all worship and adoration,
When your commands are the breaths I need,
And I know I’m not worthy of this servitude,
When you drink the tears I bleed."
Really bringing in all home....
🌹
Nice voice!
Thanks for bumping this, I'm glad I got a chance to read /listen...
-B
"This goes beyond all worship and adoration,
When your commands are the breaths I need,
And I know I’m not worthy of this servitude,
When you drink the tears I bleed."
Really bringing in all home....
🌹
Nice voice!
Thanks for bumping this, I'm glad I got a chance to read /listen...
-B
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Re: Re. A Slave to His Mistress
29th Jul 2021 3:30pm
Thank you very much Blue (and thanks for adding to your RL).
Yes, this was one of my first (and few) of spoken word I've done. I kinda dig the vampiric/dark tones, so I figured why not.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Yes, this was one of my first (and few) of spoken word I've done. I kinda dig the vampiric/dark tones, so I figured why not.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Re. A Slave to His Mistress
22nd Jul 2021 4:36am
Re: Re. A Slave to His Mistress
29th Jul 2021 3:30pm
Re. A Slave to His Mistress
2nd Nov 2021 3:28pm
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30th Dec 2021 8:40pm
The sub/dom relationships are a of a different kind. This was just a mere peek.
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30th Dec 2021 8:45pm
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5th Mar 2022 9:01pm
Re. A Slave to His Mistress
4th Feb 2022 3:55pm
Re: Re. A Slave to His Mistress
5th Mar 2022 8:59pm
Thank you very much Leo. The relationship between a dom and sub has always interested me.
Re. A Slave to His Mistress
14th Feb 2022 2:52pm
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5th Mar 2022 9:00pm