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Poetry - a visual verse
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 22nd Mar 2019
Author's Note
Entered in the Deep competition "World Poetry Day", hosted by Ahavati.
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Re. Poetry - a visual verse
22nd Mar 2019 1:00pm
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22nd Mar 2019 1:10pm
Re. Poetry - a visual verse
22nd Mar 2019 1:01pm
Beautiful definition, Jade. Very aesthetically pleasing as well.
Best of luck in the comp!
Best of luck in the comp!
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22nd Mar 2019 1:09pm
Re. Poetry - a visual verse
22nd Mar 2019 1:04pm
Re: Re. Poetry - a visual verse
My grateful thanks to you, my old friend.
For me, writing poems about poetry, is like breathing out and in.
It’s good to see you, and yes, I’ve always been partial to rain ☔️
~Jadey✍🏻
For me, writing poems about poetry, is like breathing out and in.
It’s good to see you, and yes, I’ve always been partial to rain ☔️
~Jadey✍🏻
Re. Poetry - a visual verse
22nd Mar 2019 1:30pm
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22nd Mar 2019 2:56pm
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22nd Mar 2019 1:47pm
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Thank you very much, Danny. It’s in everything.
Poetry is the very air that breathes, becoming the wind which carries the rain and slants the trees, tempest-tossed.
Everything, seen & unseen. Known & unknown.
✍🏻
Poetry is the very air that breathes, becoming the wind which carries the rain and slants the trees, tempest-tossed.
Everything, seen & unseen. Known & unknown.
✍🏻
Re. Poetry - a visual verse
22nd Mar 2019 2:56pm
And to think of the loss had you kept this only in your thoughts.
This is one of the reasons for poetry.
Pleased you've given us a peek under the scalp.
This is one of the reasons for poetry.
Pleased you've given us a peek under the scalp.
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22nd Mar 2019 3:17pm
Aww thank you so much, dear sister of the Pen. x
I’ve been a part of poetry for so long, the cells that make me a solid vision as a human, all morphed as free verse & rhyme, so that I AM poetry. Red & white corpuscles, every bit of me - poetry.
✍🏻
I’ve been a part of poetry for so long, the cells that make me a solid vision as a human, all morphed as free verse & rhyme, so that I AM poetry. Red & white corpuscles, every bit of me - poetry.
✍🏻
Re. Poetry - a visual verse
22nd Mar 2019 3:51pm
Ooooooo, I love Your explanation
of red and blue way better than
mine!
Love the graphic nature to this
Brevity spill, as well
of red and blue way better than
mine!
Love the graphic nature to this
Brevity spill, as well
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Thank you, my friend, I’m smiling wide at your upbeat reaction.
Everyone has their own unique explanation. For this piece, it came to me so fast, because I’ve lived poetry all my life, so saying a lot using a little is natural.
Your words are always from a kind heart, brother.
✍🏻
Everyone has their own unique explanation. For this piece, it came to me so fast, because I’ve lived poetry all my life, so saying a lot using a little is natural.
Your words are always from a kind heart, brother.
✍🏻
Re. Poetry - a visual verse
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2019 4:16pm
by the end, i had to exhale
didn't realise i had been holding my breath
from the first word
so eloquent, jadey
and utterly on point
xo
didn't realise i had been holding my breath
from the first word
so eloquent, jadey
and utterly on point
xo
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22nd Mar 2019 4:24pm
Re. Poetry - a visual verse
22nd Mar 2019 4:57pm
Truly a wonderful piece👏👏
I love this!
So much said using few words
Powerful penning!
I love this!
So much said using few words
Powerful penning!
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Re: Re. Poetry - a visual verse
22nd Mar 2019 5:12pm
Thank you, dear Hunter, for sharing your thoughts, and for embracing the miracle of poetry.
✍🏻
✍🏻
Re. Poetry - a visual verse
22nd Mar 2019 6:55pm
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22nd Mar 2019 7:04pm
Re. Poetry - a visual verse
As mentioned above, you are the epitome of poetry. This will most likely win as it says it all. The rhyme was spot on too. Best wishes, my sweet friend.💖
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22nd Mar 2019 7:18pm
Why thank you, my other sister, how generous of you. Once again, I’m overwhelmed. x
🙏🏻
🙏🏻
Re. Poetry - a visual verse
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2019 5:14am
Beautiful verse Jadey. Very profound, and love the visual art.
Great piece.
Matthew.
Great piece.
Matthew.
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23rd Mar 2019 10:08am
Re. Poetry - a visual verse
24th Mar 2019 4:22am
Rather mellifluous and encompassing as well. Succinctly and elegantly rendered. Just read Poet's Revenge entry into the comp.
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. Poetry - a visual verse
24th Mar 2019 12:04pm
Most gracious thanks, Daniel, in your appreciation. And yes, I have appreciated her poet’s “voice” as she continues to evolve.
~Jade
~Jade