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Psychotic
He contemplates the carving knife
Just as she gets in the shower
His mother says to take her life
At this late and dreary hour
He gets into masquerade
Wearing the maternal clothes
Most restraint begins to fade
As latent aggression grows
But the beauty washes off her sins
And he then withholds the blade
His sense of decency begins
As he mimics a motel maid
He returns to mother dear
And lays her on the ancient bed
It has become precisely clear
That she has, for years, been truly dead.
Just as she gets in the shower
His mother says to take her life
At this late and dreary hour
He gets into masquerade
Wearing the maternal clothes
Most restraint begins to fade
As latent aggression grows
But the beauty washes off her sins
And he then withholds the blade
His sense of decency begins
As he mimics a motel maid
He returns to mother dear
And lays her on the ancient bed
It has become precisely clear
That she has, for years, been truly dead.
Author's Note
Suggested by the Alfred Hitchcock film "Psycho."
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Re. Psychotic
20th Mar 2019 7:17pm
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20th Mar 2019 7:39pm
"Psycho" is one of my favorite films, a true American masterpiece in my opinion. Still, it's not above a little ribbing. Thank you for the kind words and RL entry, Pandora!
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Anonymous
20th Mar 2019 7:24pm
Oh this is excellent!
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20th Mar 2019 7:40pm
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20th Mar 2019 7:43pm
Thanks, JusTim. When "Psycho" was first released it scared the hell out of audiences. It still packs a punch, or perhaps a stab.
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20th Mar 2019 7:45pm
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20th Mar 2019 8:30pm
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20th Mar 2019 8:45pm
Thank you, LilDragonFly. "Psycho" was a groundbreaker, well ahead of its time.
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20th Mar 2019 9:07pm
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20th Mar 2019 9:21pm
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20th Mar 2019 11:08pm
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21st Mar 2019 10:18pm
Thank you Thedeadinme. It is a fascinating film, both terrifying and psychologically profound, seems to me. Norman Bates made quite a mark.
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21st Mar 2019 2:21am
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21st Mar 2019 10:20pm
I try to supply a twist or a surprise ending to much of my work. Glad it clicked for you, brokentitanium.