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Frangibly Solicitous
Last night I tried
attempted to kiss You
tried to kiss the tears
from Your eyes
to show You
I understand.
Though not always
able
to comprehend
still I try. . .
tried.
Your careful wall
that protects
evidently is too high
for me.
Maybe one day
You’ll open
a gate
so the next time
it’s raining
I can kiss the
tears from
Your eyes.
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For my Friend,
HowlingWhelms (Noire)
Written by
Tallen
(earth_empath)
Published 15th Mar 2019
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Re. Frangibly Solicitous
15th Mar 2019 9:53pm
this is so beautiful dearest Tallen
she will absolutely love it...
love Brenda 💕
she will absolutely love it...
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. Frangibly Solicitous
15th Mar 2019 9:55pm
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
15th Mar 2019 9:54pm
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Re: Re. Frangibly Solicitous
15th Mar 2019 9:56pm
thank You for sharing with me
it was my intent to create
a Beautiful tender spill
it was my intent to create
a Beautiful tender spill
Re: Re. Frangibly Solicitous
15th Mar 2019 10:30pm
Re. Frangibly Solicitous
15th Mar 2019 11:00pm
So gentle and reassuring. . . To whom this poem is intended to, surely it will be liked and loved.
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Re: Re. Frangibly Solicitous
15th Mar 2019 11:03pm
appreciate You stopping by to read and for the kind comments
Hoping she sees this today.......
Hoping she sees this today.......
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15th Mar 2019 11:05pm
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15th Mar 2019 11:17pm
Re. Frangibly Solicitous
15th Mar 2019 11:14pm
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15th Mar 2019 11:15pm
Re. Frangibly Solicitous
Anonymous
15th Mar 2019 11:17pm
Now that’s how it sounds when it’s straight from the heart... beautiful.
It’ll be a different kind of tear she sheds when she reads this :)
It’ll be a different kind of tear she sheds when she reads this :)
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Re: Re. Frangibly Solicitous
15th Mar 2019 11:19pm
Wooooooow -- well put,
and now my face is getting wet thinking about what You just shared.....
thank You
and now my face is getting wet thinking about what You just shared.....
thank You
Re. Frangibly Solicitous
im more than touched
so, here's a thoughtful timeshare of tears and metaphysical mascara, for you:
- som,iii
moments come when there’s no sense to me..and
stars becomes a rotary of faults,
to silence the remains of twenty-six letters that no
one knows how to speak;..but it’s three hours pass
midnite, and couldve sworn it was two or three
degrees ago on the centigrade scale when pieces
of me were whole,yet in pieces, but reading this
makes me feel like an depiction written by
Dante Gabriel Rossetti’s visionary hands
Thank you i adore this and you Tallen, and thank you
for remaining such a rudimentary relativity here in life,
now you must stay....ever a presence because i m
extremely sensitive about those whom my soul roams about
im such a bigbaby, i know, hugs
so, here's a thoughtful timeshare of tears and metaphysical mascara, for you:
- som,iii
moments come when there’s no sense to me..and
stars becomes a rotary of faults,
to silence the remains of twenty-six letters that no
one knows how to speak;..but it’s three hours pass
midnite, and couldve sworn it was two or three
degrees ago on the centigrade scale when pieces
of me were whole,yet in pieces, but reading this
makes me feel like an depiction written by
Dante Gabriel Rossetti’s visionary hands
Thank you i adore this and you Tallen, and thank you
for remaining such a rudimentary relativity here in life,
now you must stay....ever a presence because i m
extremely sensitive about those whom my soul roams about
im such a bigbaby, i know, hugs
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Re: Re. Frangibly Solicitous
17th Mar 2019 8:15pm
this is one of THE most
thoughtful
Beautiful
responses I've ever been graced with
left me without enough words
for many many days and nights.
thoughtful
Beautiful
responses I've ever been graced with
left me without enough words
for many many days and nights.
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
18th Mar 2019 9:51pm
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Re: Re. Frangibly Solicitous
18th Mar 2019 9:58pm
Developed over the years
and I feel that my conversion
to zen Buddhism brought out
what was always there but
hidden.....or suppressed.
appreciate the read and Your share
and I feel that my conversion
to zen Buddhism brought out
what was always there but
hidden.....or suppressed.
appreciate the read and Your share
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25th Mar 2019 11:50pm
Re. Frangibly Solicitous
24th Dec 2019 10:33pm
Re: Re. Frangibly Solicitous
25th Dec 2019 2:14am
Frangible felt like a softer warmer more loving
type of fragile to me
Yes,
it is a wonderful word
appreciate the read and share
type of fragile to me
Yes,
it is a wonderful word
appreciate the read and share
Re. Frangibly Solicitous
23rd Mar 2020 6:00am
Maybe one day walls
will be climbed despite nettles,
brambles and barbed wire
will be climbed despite nettles,
brambles and barbed wire
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