In its simplest form

Conversely, the rain
will dilute salt tears
that have taken years
to accumulate...
just because there is
no longer ...fresh
from the source... Ely

Hullo, good sir

quite the profoundity you laid down there, Elly, thanks.

and thanks also for taking the time to read and comment

Hello to you too Sir-or-madam  
My name is pro-noun-ced like the letters, ''L-E'' = Ely
rather than, ''ee-lai'' = Eli...  
No problem for you/no problem for me... I'm a card-totin' LOL...See?
Ely ;D

PS,There's a typo in the Title, good sir, there's a need to replace the second 'i' in ''simplist'', with an 'e'... *simplest.*... such a nice piece deserves a little extra attention...

Hullo

ah, I see what I did there. my apologies

in retrospect, I figure Eli sounds vey Amish and I don't think they do technology yet. heh


thanks bunches for the edit, I'll fix that now  

you don't post nearly often enough, Eam...
... but when you do, Mariana Trench deep

Hullo, lady

haven't really found a good balance between reading and writing, but I'll get there :).

thanks much, for your visit and words

Love the brevity which emits so much feeling

Hullo, Kate  

good to see you're evolving self. muchly appreciative of your vist and thoughts

always a pleasure
to read you ...

hullo, lady

welcome back. more a pleasure to be read

thanks muchly for dropping in and leaving your thoughts

Hullo, Lady

yeah, it is that right enough.  much thanks for your visit and words. greatly appreciated  

There is such depth in your ocean. Excellent ink.

Yours,

LostGirl

Hullo  

very kind of you to say,  Lady  

and thanks muchly for dropping by and leaving your thoughtprints

*hat tip*

g'deevinin'

your comments ooze poetry, good sir. thanks muchly for dropping by and leaving them. much appreciated

so very simple so very deep

Hullo, lady

like your good self, I'm sure :)- apologies for my late reply. appreciate your presence and thoughts much

Poetically and powerfully expressed! Minimal words but maximum impact!

Hullo and welcome to DUP

ahh, this one brings me back ..unfortunately

many thanks for the read and comment, much appreciated and I hope your stay here is most enjoyable

Congratulations!

thanks much!  

*takes bow*

You're welcome.

Simple and strongly expressed, we have that steady ocean in us then it'll go bad with huge tides and waves cause of things that saddens or madden's us.

Great work hun keep it up 🤗

Hullo, and welcome

really clever way of putting it, lady. and thanks much for dropping by to say it, and indeed for saying it

*hat tip*

You so welcome hun, i just say how i see it in someones writing.

My ocean most of the time is crashing against the reefs and it's seaweeds captivate me trying to drown me but i always surface up to keep breathing life's purity of torments that never will fade. Gotta know how to flow with the oceans currents and know how to dodge away obstacles and enemies that try to end our positive fate.

And a golden magical coin is dropped at your tip hat, 💛🤗

Wow... a powerful expression in its intense brevity! You gotta' let some of those rains out every now and again in the form of tears - and poetry (as you have!)

I really liked this little poem... lots of emotion invoked in few words... really good stuff.