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proverbs
metaphors of the heart
speaking in tongues
little hallelujahs for my man
hidden beneath my ribcage lies a key
love makes it come unhinged
bare and exposed I am vulnerable
you are my weak spot
between bone and muscle
is the truth of me
masculinity made flesh
an angel in the body of a man
in my temple, I worship the scripture of you
god incarnate
a cult follower building my own tower of Babylon
when my prayers don't reach your ears
I climb principalities to touch you
my immorality, my mortality...I'm only human
I hurt when I fail to please you
crucified in my sin
though you never fault me
looking the other way when I fall short
you lift me up within your smiles
hold me tight between your parables of love
write proverbs I can live with
justify me to god
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10th Mar 2019 10:41pm
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10th Mar 2019 10:54pm
thank you beautiful Daniella for feeling the love here and the divine quote...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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10th Mar 2019 10:56pm
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10th Mar 2019 10:57pm
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10th Mar 2019 10:59pm
A love poem with a fine spiritual context. "Write proverbs I can live with." He can do no less. Excellent...
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10th Mar 2019 11:00pm
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10th Mar 2019 11:12pm
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10th Mar 2019 11:15pm
thank you graciously beautiful Kat for the love here... yes it's a true story about my man...he's really good to me...I deeply cherish your thoughts lovely one...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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10th Mar 2019 11:44pm
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10th Mar 2019 11:45pm
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Re: Re. proverbs
11th Mar 2019 00:55am
thank you dearest for the love here it's deeply felt yes he treats me right I'm grateful...
I'm happy this side of me moved you...
love Brenda 💕
I'm happy this side of me moved you...
love Brenda 💕
Re. proverbs
11th Mar 2019 1:04am
Beautiful and deep expressions of love dear Brenda. He is lucky to get that kind of love from you.
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11th Mar 2019 1:32am
thank you graciously beautiful Summer for the love on this write... you are deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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11th Mar 2019 1:55am
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11th Mar 2019 2:15am
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11th Mar 2019 2:17am
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Re. proverbs
11th Mar 2019 2:09am
yes, yes, yes ma'am... and that's all I gotta say..
absolutely, it's amazing because a man who is true
inside himself, his woman will follow with burning
faith and undying desire even when times are seemingly
off-key..
...but she has to know that he's got her and vise versa,
I imagine.... Sans the extra BS though, ect ect ect repeatedly..
Anyways, this is beautiful, you've made me feel
absolutely, it's amazing because a man who is true
inside himself, his woman will follow with burning
faith and undying desire even when times are seemingly
off-key..
...but she has to know that he's got her and vise versa,
I imagine.... Sans the extra BS though, ect ect ect repeatedly..
Anyways, this is beautiful, you've made me feel
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Re: Re. proverbs
11th Mar 2019 2:14am
thank you graciously beautiful one I'm so happy you felt this one... I deeply appreciate the love on it...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. proverbs
11th Mar 2019 2:30am
So happy for you and your one true love...
love this sweet love poem... I gave a kiss to my girl after reading
Jeff
love this sweet love poem... I gave a kiss to my girl after reading
Jeff
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Re: Re. proverbs
11th Mar 2019 2:59am
thank you graciously dearest Jeff so happy to have that kind of effect...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. proverbs
11th Mar 2019 3:33am
There is no better union than when this works both ways.
Wonderful words you've splashed upon the page.
Blessed are we both.
Wonderful words you've splashed upon the page.
Blessed are we both.
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Re: Re. proverbs
11th Mar 2019 3:42am
thank you beautiful Teri for the love here I'm happy for you as well...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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11th Mar 2019 11:39am
His love and adoration no more than you deserve dearest Brenda. Beautiful, spiritual write. David x
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Re: Re. proverbs
11th Mar 2019 11:41am
thank you dearest David for the love on this write it's felt... he is beautiful to me...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹