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daffodil
you gloried in the dark matter of me
rubbed your fingers in my filth
masturbated ideas to fuck me with
I drank your lothario flavored lies
like moonshine on tap from God's cock
as gospel truth
such a foolish girl
I sang to you of midnights in my naive days
tried to impress you with my harlotry
you read me poetry from your stereo
we hit our tempo in Xanax bars
a chorus of the wasted and lonely
played on a constant loop in our heads
I read you graffitied scriptures
written on bathroom stalls
in my menstrual blood
I was split inside
you listened to my demons
then got their number
and fucked every one
we were Bonnie and Clyde
criminals in depravity
Lucifer's eye...damn right
yeah, baby it only hurts sometimes...
when you buried your pain deep inside me
and for the last time said goodbye
I died little deaths
while my broken daffodil smile
stayed plastered to my face
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11th Mar 2019 3:45am
Anonymous
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11th Mar 2019 4:10am
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11th Mar 2019 10:45am
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11th Mar 2019 4:19am
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11th Mar 2019 10:46am
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Re: Re. daffodil
11th Mar 2019 10:48am
thank you dearest poet for the love...never worry I am alright...hurt comes with the territory when your heart is open and dreaming...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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11th Mar 2019 10:39am
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11th Mar 2019 10:49am
thank you graciously dearest Poet for the love here I missed you...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. daffodil
11th Mar 2019 10:55am
I wasn't reading or writing much while I was away but I'm back and searching again ....
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11th Mar 2019 10:56am
I understand when I vacation I usually don't either...I look forward to you laying some ink down ❤
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11th Mar 2019 11:15am
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11th Mar 2019 11:24am
thank you graciously dearest Tender One for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. daffodil
11th Mar 2019 2:29pm
I sense your hurt in this & truly hate that for you. I wish your soul wasn't so heavy. Hugs to you.
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Re: Re. daffodil
11th Mar 2019 2:34pm
thank you beautiful Pandora for the love... I will shelter in the faith of my childhood for relief...there where it remains pure...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. daffodil
11th Mar 2019 11:06pm
Those last two lines are heartbreaking, and this whole write resonates with me. Intense and brilliant work, dear Brenda.
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Re: Re. daffodil
11th Mar 2019 11:10pm
thank you dearest Thomas for feeling me so deeply only sad you relate...I deeply appreciate you dear friend...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. daffodil
12th Mar 2019 00:21am
thank you graciously dearest poet there are times my poems have a natural internal rhythm this is one...wow that's a wonderful coincidence... I deeply appreciate you sharing your thoughts...you brought me smiles...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. daffodil
14th Mar 2019 1:23am
“Daffodil smile” yea that truly holds a mystical
quality if you ask me... brilliant work Crim... :)
quality if you ask me... brilliant work Crim... :)
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