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Likes And Desires
(Inspired)
I like the rain
Desire the smell
afterwards
I like reading
Desire a story that's
Captivating
I like singing
Desire someone
To sing with
I like dessert
Desire pie
Any kind
I like the Autumn
Desire colorful leaves
And Halloween
I like love
Desire finding it
Again
I like the rain
Desire the smell
afterwards
I like reading
Desire a story that's
Captivating
I like singing
Desire someone
To sing with
I like dessert
Desire pie
Any kind
I like the Autumn
Desire colorful leaves
And Halloween
I like love
Desire finding it
Again
Published 4th Mar 2019
| Edited 6th Mar 2019
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6th Mar 2019 4:18am
YW...your poems are of a professional level ...I can just tell you must have been writing poetry for like ever
6th Mar 2019 4:22am
Yeah, I've Been 80 since I was 16. Think I may have that Benjamin Button disease. Lol
6th Mar 2019 5:12am
Nice triplets. Very simple but effective. Melancholic finish gives it bite.
6th Mar 2019 5:19am
6th Mar 2019 5:23am
I'm sorry but I keep thinking about a Macky D's apple pie.
You know, once upon a time you could have one with ice cream & strawberry sauce all in one container! ;-)
You know, once upon a time you could have one with ice cream & strawberry sauce all in one container! ;-)
6th Mar 2019 5:31am
6th Mar 2019 5:42am
Who doesn't, right? I'm going off topic I know but to hell with it, right; makes the comment count look good anyway. Do u like a hot doughnut with ice cream, chopped nuts & chocolate syrup too? We call them 'brown derby's' here at the Wimpy bar restaurant.
6th Mar 2019 6:22am
23rd Mar 2019 7:17am
has a real authentic feel to it, feels personal. Unsatisfied desires are so difficult to deal with and desperation can take us down the wrong path. Tread very carefully when it comes to the last stanza especially. The last stanza is perfect
a special ink here :-)))))))))))))))))))))
a special ink here :-)))))))))))))))))))))
23rd Mar 2019 3:37pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Nov 2023 11:45pm
31st Mar 2019 6:25am
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31st Mar 2019 6:32am
Your words feel like the perfect close to the poem. ..
Desire finding it
Again
I'm Not sure I ever will.
Nice. THANKS
Desire finding it
Again
I'm Not sure I ever will.
Nice. THANKS
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Nov 2023 11:45pm
31st Mar 2019 6:34am
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31st Mar 2019 6:38am
Then I'm very sorry to hear it. I know from personal experience though, that DU is a wonderful place to cure that. Take my word: from an uncaged bird.
13th Jun 2019 2:18am
