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alice has gone Mad
latex gloves examine my feelings
cold and calculated precision dissects
a fluorescent sun shines on my imperfections
in my midnight gloom
pomegranates pray to false deities
I fall inside myself...again
speculum sex
I am just a number
prisoner 101
slave to mothership Earth
I look to the tiny flowers for relief
they whisper behind my back... she's gone mad
in my silent reign I have
green magic will heal me today
nuclear energy the color of war and money
ninner, ninner chicken dinner
the blades of grass too
nature will serve me well
pay me to stay sane
with the pleasant gossip of the winds
as the tree Guardians watch over my dreams
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Re. alice has gone Mad
3rd Mar 2019 2:44pm
Nature is such a soother but I feel this is one of those days nothing will break you free from the gloom. I'm starting to really understand you better through your writing. On the bright side, atleast your Alice can creatively explain the potion & madness, one healer many don't have. I guess I'm playing white rabbit & trying to turn the dark side to a bright one. Love you, try sleeping the day away if you can.💖
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3rd Mar 2019 3:52pm
thank you beautiful one nature does soothe... no worries beautiful one I will be fine... in my writing is where I shelter I know I'm safe here...I love your positive attitude and vibes you are truly cherished...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. alice has gone Mad
3rd Mar 2019 3:43pm
Really enjoyed this creative poem. The line "we're all mad here" come to mind 😁. I have someone I love very much who suffers from bipolar. It's something hard for anyone to understand. I don't even really get all of it.
Maybe hugs and support will help 🤗
Maybe hugs and support will help 🤗
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Re: Re. alice has gone Mad
3rd Mar 2019 3:54pm
thank you graciously dearest DC for the love and understanding on this write... hugs you back for you and your loved one who suffers similarly...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda ❤
Re. alice has gone Mad
3rd Mar 2019 3:56pm
A bath in natures healing is always welcome ... let the chlorophyll jungle transmute you to higher light with suns warming glow ... lovely write ... Bless and love ...
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Re: Re. alice has gone Mad
3rd Mar 2019 4:08pm
thank you dearest FeNyx yes nature is always a healer however nature is also a force lest we forget... I deeply appreciate the love here...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. alice has gone Mad
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Mar 2019 5:52pm
3rd Mar 2019 5:41pm
Everyone is Mad indeed dearest Brenda! In different ways and for different reasons, we all subside to some category invented by the "normal people". They seem to forget that madness is the antichamber of the genius. In ancient times, those who were tormented by the gods, were considered sacred oracles. Highly respected and listened to. Coincidently, they too, were one with nature, receiving from the earth, confort and knowledge. So the hell with normality. Your words are conforting to my heart, even if painful to read. love to you my dear. J
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3rd Mar 2019 5:47pm
thank you dearest Juvenalis you always know how to soothe the beast in me... yes Mad more like pissed off about how things are...I'm very happy for your presence today you are a great comfort...
love & hugs...
Brenda 🌹
love & hugs...
Brenda 🌹
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3rd Mar 2019 6:33pm
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Re: Re. alice has gone Mad
4th Mar 2019 12:58pm
thank you dearest poet for identifying yes nature gives our mind that needed peace when nothing else can...
I deeply appreciate your sharing...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate your sharing...
love Brenda 💕
Re. alice has gone Mad
3rd Mar 2019 6:42pm
i spoke with an amazing man last week during my own descent into my personal chaos and he said there are very few normal/sane people left... i find that comforting... we all have our own shadows lurking between the synapses... some of us turn it into unspeakably, painfully glorious art... like this... like everything you write.
you are a true warrior & i so admire you for grabbing each day, each ache, each challeng by the balls
xoxoxox
much love to you
you are a true warrior & i so admire you for grabbing each day, each ache, each challeng by the balls
xoxoxox
much love to you
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4th Mar 2019 1:00pm
thank you beautiful one you don't know how much you deeply moved me today...you're a true soul artist and a warrior too...your comment found me in a darkened place today and lit up the night...
I deeply cherish you...
love you lady...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply cherish you...
love you lady...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. alice has gone Mad
3rd Mar 2019 11:56pm
Nature as a force of sanity. That's an idea I should keep in mind. It's hard to trust the whims and complexities of the city, and the human race in general. It's the world that's gone mad, not Alice. I can hear it right outside my door, right now. Reading this helps me cope. Thank you Brenda!
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Re: Re. alice has gone Mad
4th Mar 2019 1:01pm
thank you dearest Thomas yes nature is a true balm to the soul... yes the world has gone mad... I appreciate you Thomas...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. alice has gone Mad
4th Mar 2019 11:54pm
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4th Mar 2019 11:57pm
thank you dearest Lyrical One giggles though you might not like it...I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. alice has gone Mad
5th Mar 2019 3:30pm
Awesome ink from your beautiful mind Brenda. You always make me sit up and pay attention in class; Whether it's because you're a strict disciplinarian or the favourite teacher with the low-cut blouse depends on the write … but I always pay attention! Dx
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5th Mar 2019 3:53pm
thank you graciously dearest David your thoughts made me smile and warmed me...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕