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With him
Sexy kisses moistening my crevices
Fingers touching
Sensational commotions
Hands sliding up and down
With his own lotion
I'm close to explosion
Sensual looks on his face
Hands going faster
Picking up the pace
Hot sex follows
Finished in a warm embrace.
Fingers touching
Sensational commotions
Hands sliding up and down
With his own lotion
I'm close to explosion
Sensual looks on his face
Hands going faster
Picking up the pace
Hot sex follows
Finished in a warm embrace.
Published 23rd Feb 2019
Author's Note
What we did the other night
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23rd Feb 2019 7:21am
23rd Feb 2019 7:34am
23rd Feb 2019 8:05am
Love the sequence, played out in lines of few (no more than five) words apiece, with the penetrating moments left to imagination.
23rd Feb 2019 8:34am
I think less is more at times and then the reading can imagine whatever they like. Thnx 4 the comment.
23rd Feb 2019 11:16am
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23rd Feb 2019 3:11pm
23rd Feb 2019 4:35pm
Definitely erotic. Full of hints and suggestions that leave room for a mind to supply its own tawdry details.
I like the way you lead a horse to water...
I like the way you lead a horse to water...
8th May 2019 6:45am
Glad to be leading people on their own sexual journey with few words. Thanks for the read and comment ;-)
23rd Feb 2019 6:53pm
26th Feb 2019 11:41am
26th Feb 2019 11:48am
Xxx thnxs 4 ur comments sexy dragonfly, appreciated...xxx more sexy kisses to you
Anonymous
27th Feb 2019 11:09am
Deliciousness
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
16th Mar 2019 7:59am
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16th Mar 2019 11:15am
Glad to hear it. Plenty going on in this brain of mine. Thanks for noticing me :-)
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
16th Mar 2019 4:38pm
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