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Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
There's a manic monkey making a huge mess,
a hint of madness in his eyes,
paranoia paralyzing his psyche as he drowns in delusions and lies..
"Wake up wake up and smell the roses"
Open your mind and see this massive mess,
we're nothing but pests especially here in the west,
nothing but fiends just stuck in machines
Nothing but souls spinning out of control
wake up the others we're all lovers..
This is a world where they weed out the weaklings,
this is where they reward the warmongers
Here's where they're quick to cling to power and greed and forget all about those in need..
Wake up
Wake up and smell the burning shitshow.
This is the realm where relaxation revolts us,
Don't rest don't play
the tyrants shout as they tiptoe away.
No restraints no constraints
on our power as a species
Spinning on a sphere in space..
The others are lovers.
Wake up
Wake up and sense the separation,
See all the silent shooters sniping spirits,
This is a world which
we've created..
Just specks of dust
eachother we all should be able trust,
another species almost all out of luck
mostly cause we didn't give a fuck.
"Wake up wake up and smell the roses"
Take a last look at this lost land
before she's gone along with us..
Maybe we don't care to understand.
a hint of madness in his eyes,
paranoia paralyzing his psyche as he drowns in delusions and lies..
"Wake up wake up and smell the roses"
Open your mind and see this massive mess,
we're nothing but pests especially here in the west,
nothing but fiends just stuck in machines
Nothing but souls spinning out of control
wake up the others we're all lovers..
This is a world where they weed out the weaklings,
this is where they reward the warmongers
Here's where they're quick to cling to power and greed and forget all about those in need..
Wake up
Wake up and smell the burning shitshow.
This is the realm where relaxation revolts us,
Don't rest don't play
the tyrants shout as they tiptoe away.
No restraints no constraints
on our power as a species
Spinning on a sphere in space..
The others are lovers.
Wake up
Wake up and sense the separation,
See all the silent shooters sniping spirits,
This is a world which
we've created..
Just specks of dust
eachother we all should be able trust,
another species almost all out of luck
mostly cause we didn't give a fuck.
"Wake up wake up and smell the roses"
Take a last look at this lost land
before she's gone along with us..
Maybe we don't care to understand.
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Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
21st Feb 2019 2:04pm
I see the shit show every day
I understand this perfectly
I'm trying to wake them up
with the humanity key
but as you know they have none...
great write Hunter...
love Brenda ❤
I understand this perfectly
I'm trying to wake them up
with the humanity key
but as you know they have none...
great write Hunter...
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
21st Feb 2019 3:36pm
Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
21st Feb 2019 2:07pm
Great Write ... all we can do is work with our own circles ... and hopefully those in will work with their circles ... and so on ... Bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
21st Feb 2019 3:37pm
Very true FeNyX i agree thanks for reading and leaving a great comment as always Much appreciation!🙏
Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
21st Feb 2019 2:41pm
"This is a world where they weed out the weaklings,
this is where they reward the warmongers"
It always amazes me that the very same people who don't want evolution taught in schools are the same ones that promote economic Darwinism.
Thank you for your courageous write.
this is where they reward the warmongers"
It always amazes me that the very same people who don't want evolution taught in schools are the same ones that promote economic Darwinism.
Thank you for your courageous write.
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Re: Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
21st Feb 2019 3:38pm
Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
21st Feb 2019 2:59pm
Re: Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
21st Feb 2019 3:39pm
Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
21st Feb 2019 4:09pm
We all evolve in our own time and way, Hunter. No matter how many scream and beg . . .
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22nd Feb 2019 1:57am
Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
21st Feb 2019 4:15pm
Your mind always seems to be in overdrive and and deep thought. I applaud that & your writes. Forgive me though, as I'm not getting the #truthoflife
theme that seems to be running here @ the DUP. Just trying to figure this out.🤔
theme that seems to be running here @ the DUP. Just trying to figure this out.🤔
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Re: Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
22nd Feb 2019 2:01am
You know me well!
It definitely is
Appreciate you reading🙏
And What do you mean like what does it have to do with the piece?
It definitely is
Appreciate you reading🙏
And What do you mean like what does it have to do with the piece?
Re: Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
22nd Feb 2019 2:04am
Oh, the wake up & shitshow theme. I'm like the poet stranded here not getting it. Lol
They're all hash tagged with that. I do love your mind, it's indeed very complex;)
They're all hash tagged with that. I do love your mind, it's indeed very complex;)
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Re: Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
22nd Feb 2019 2:16am
Well by that I just mean like the shit show that society has been turned into but we probably just use #truthoflife to signify what the piece is about? which is usually some meaning of life type shit or deeper hidden truths of the universe type shit not entirely sure Appreciate you reading though and taking time to comment!🙏
Re: Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
22nd Feb 2019 2:19am
Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
21st Feb 2019 9:20pm
Re: Re. Wake up wake up and smell the burning shit show
22nd Feb 2019 2:03am
For sure the shittiest show ever
I love how your comment was made at 420 👌
Appreciate you reading🙏
I love how your comment was made at 420 👌
Appreciate you reading🙏
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22nd Feb 2019 10:51pm
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