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deconstructing love
intellectualizing the anti-matters of the heart
the positive, negatives and how they attract
isn't for the human mind...
we can deconstruct the point of entry
examine the site love first occurred
expound on the how's and why's of it
still, rational thought will evade us
while caught up in the throes
at its mercy, we succumb
with the knowledge even if we survive
we will never be the same
forever changed...
we wander-
chained to a passion
we feel its restrictions
the opener of one world
just to shut another
one where we were free...
to be reckless
you see love is precious
trusts broken cannot be mended
lust and love together are the epitome of bliss
attracting positrons collide
and entwine at a sub-molecular level
a celestial DNA strand with eternal imprinting
as the flavor of two souls
mingled becomes one
and the ethereal plays-
out its desires in the flesh
true forces of nature
I don't think anything more powerful
in all the dimensions
for it, you will travel any distance
bend time to meet your destined
then as fast at it came
one day it departs
was it ever really real?
you will never know
no, not in this lifetime
it's not something you can touch
or do an autopsy on
the cause of death
when it comes to the matters of the heart
will remain a mystery
the mortal coil fragile
and yet love is immortal
karma-summation...love will...
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 17th Feb 2019
| Edited 18th Feb 2019
Author's Note
thank you BluntHonestMe for your help ❤
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Re. deconstructing love
17th Feb 2019 11:18pm
Sometimes one must just expand their vision beyond the norm ... to really see ... even into the aetheral ... alas ... if only ... Lovely write ... Bless and love ...
good pic ...
good pic ...
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Re: Re. deconstructing love
17th Feb 2019 11:31pm
Re. deconstructing love
17th Feb 2019 11:25pm
YES!!! Lol I love everything you did with those lines. “The ethereal plays out it’s desires in the flesh” OMG. I love where u took it. Was “ant-matter” on purpose or a typo? Because that works too lol. Naw this is going on the RL..
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really I'm so happy you liked where I took that part
it was with your help got me pushing through ❤
it was with your help got me pushing through ❤
Re: Re. deconstructing love
17th Feb 2019 11:37pm
Lol right! “Ant-matters” they are that’s what made it so amusing. No problem anytime. All I did was give u some vague ideas to make the “Good” “Great”. The metamorphosis made it worth it. Great Write💙💙
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Re: Re. deconstructing love
18th Feb 2019 00:34am
Its never a problem. Seeing the finished product was so rewarding. Thank you.
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Re: Re. deconstructing love
18th Feb 2019 1:52am
Re. deconstructing love
A philosophical delight, Brenda. You have constructed an intricate write, a wonder with your usual flair. Favorite lines:
lust and love together are the epitome of bliss
attracting positrons collide
and entwin at a sub-molecular level
a celestial DNA strand with eternal imprinting
as the flavor of two souls
mingled becomes one
and the ethereal plays-
out its desires in the flesh
This work shines with eloquence, and I love your take on desires, the ethereal connection.
lust and love together are the epitome of bliss
attracting positrons collide
and entwin at a sub-molecular level
a celestial DNA strand with eternal imprinting
as the flavor of two souls
mingled becomes one
and the ethereal plays-
out its desires in the flesh
This work shines with eloquence, and I love your take on desires, the ethereal connection.
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Re: Re. deconstructing love
18th Feb 2019 1:32am
thank you graciously dearest Thomas that portion evolved after BluntHonestMe encouraged me to look deeper...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. deconstructing love
18th Feb 2019 2:49am
thank you dearest poet for feeling me so deeply love is one that affects us all on such a deep level our mortal minds can't know just how deep,,,
I'm of the mind we immortally imprinted upon...our celestial DNA one for all time...
love Brenda ❤
I'm of the mind we immortally imprinted upon...our celestial DNA one for all time...
love Brenda ❤
Re. deconstructing love
18th Feb 2019 3:07am
Ah, touchy subject for me..all that fleeting stuff. It's all so true, can't be questioned because it can't be explained or there be an answer.
" lust and love together are the epitome of bliss
attracting positrons collide
and entwin at a sub-molecular level
a celestial DNA strand with eternal imprinting ".... great summary & take on the perspective. Funny enough, I've found more than just caring people & writing but now I'm wanting to feed my spirituality and celestial being. Hehe
🌺 Thank you dear Goddess crimson for your enlightenment 🌺
" lust and love together are the epitome of bliss
attracting positrons collide
and entwin at a sub-molecular level
a celestial DNA strand with eternal imprinting ".... great summary & take on the perspective. Funny enough, I've found more than just caring people & writing but now I'm wanting to feed my spirituality and celestial being. Hehe
🌺 Thank you dear Goddess crimson for your enlightenment 🌺
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Re: Re. deconstructing love
18th Feb 2019 3:40am
thank you beautiful Pandora for your very beautifully thoughtful comment...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. deconstructing love
18th Feb 2019 4:23am
the last few words says it all..
this is deep, you put your all into this one
bravo.. love the methodism of it..
this is deep, you put your all into this one
bravo.. love the methodism of it..
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Re: Re. deconstructing love
18th Feb 2019 4:25am
thank you beautiful one for feeling me on this...
love will it is immortal...
love Brenda 🌹
love will it is immortal...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. deconstructing love
18th Feb 2019 7:26am
Science! I love it Brenda. I agree with Crowfly and do not think it could be elucidated better. Really knocked me awake as I was beginning to doze. Bravo. Emotion and reason, heart and mind, flowing with power and grace.
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. deconstructing love
19th Feb 2019 1:38am
thank you graciously dearest Daniel for the love on this write,,, it was kind of a different for me...I'm still unsure where the idea came from...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. deconstructing love
19th Feb 2019 1:39am
thank you beautiful Kat for the love on this write yes love is the elusive mystery...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Re: Re. deconstructing love
19th Feb 2019 1:40am
thank you beautiful Melia for understanding the divine nature here entwined with the mortal...I cherish your thoughts deeply...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕