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Heart Day❤️
( a Sonnet )
The challenge of this very special year
When many others greet it with a shrug
For me and mine the meaning is so clear
Today to give our heartstrings each a tug
It’s small considering it’s of the heart
When separated by the flooding miles
That inundate and split the roads apart
And still communicate despite the trials
But as I’m grateful for my little cell
As distance shrinks a bit to hear his coo
To celebrate traditions we know well
When it’s for love we practice what to do
We set aside the chocolate & the sweets
To trade to have him sample all my treats
The challenge of this very special year
When many others greet it with a shrug
For me and mine the meaning is so clear
Today to give our heartstrings each a tug
It’s small considering it’s of the heart
When separated by the flooding miles
That inundate and split the roads apart
And still communicate despite the trials
But as I’m grateful for my little cell
As distance shrinks a bit to hear his coo
To celebrate traditions we know well
When it’s for love we practice what to do
We set aside the chocolate & the sweets
To trade to have him sample all my treats
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 15th Feb 2019
| Edited 14th Feb 2020
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15th Feb 2019 1:45am
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15th Feb 2019 1:47am
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15th Feb 2019 2:38am
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15th Feb 2019 2:03am
aawwy my jade! gosh it's been years and you two are still ever -so precious to me,
tissue please! sincerely
tissue please! sincerely
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15th Feb 2019 2:44am
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15th Feb 2019 2:30am
You give sacred meaning to an open box of chocolates ... forever ruined ... Bless and love ... Happy Valentines Day!!!
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15th Feb 2019 2:46am
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15th Feb 2019 2:55am
A perfect Valentine's Day poem, Jade. It has eloquence and heart. It was a joy talking to you yesterday, and you amaze me now.
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15th Feb 2019 3:08am
Why thank you so much, my bestest crowfly friend! With a wish of love & regaining the warmth in your home so that you & Ninja are safe & feeling loved. x
Jadey💝
Jadey💝
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15th Feb 2019 5:51am
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15th Feb 2019 6:22am
Thank you, DaVinci, and my wish to you for the same.
Now I wish I could rip through a 1lb box of See’s Bordeaux, omg...
Now I wish I could rip through a 1lb box of See’s Bordeaux, omg...
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15th Feb 2019 12:08pm
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15th Feb 2019 2:59pm
as exquisite as ever Jadey! this beautiful rendition of Sonnet by you! Pure Gem! Amazing , your art. Felt deep the subject!
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15th Feb 2019 5:31pm
Thank you, my dear friend, for your kind & generous support... it’s /always/ so good to see you drop in for a read. I hope things have been well for you.
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Re. Heart Day
16th Feb 2019 11:26am
Just as sure footed and well written as ever. Not a surprise when it came from your pen. I thought it was grand.
John
John
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John! Hello my friend, I hope life is treating you well.
And thank you so much for your appreciation, and such kind words.
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And thank you so much for your appreciation, and such kind words.
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Anonymous
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16th Feb 2019 12:45pm
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Thank you, my feline sister, for your appreciation, and for your lovers prescription. We’ll be refilling it often through the year!
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Re. Heart Day
16th Feb 2019 4:17pm
Okay, this is spicy lol 👀👀😍😍. Line for line the arrangement and the progression go hand and hand with the tone. This inspires me to pen a sonnet one of these days. It gives a modern feel to an ancient format. Well done
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17th Feb 2019 1:18am
Thank you, Mel, for the honor of your thoughts of support & appreciation to my ink.
It was late in my career as a writer/ poet when I finally tackled the Sonnet form. But once I published my first-ever Sonnet right here at the Deep site, I was hooked.
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It was late in my career as a writer/ poet when I finally tackled the Sonnet form. But once I published my first-ever Sonnet right here at the Deep site, I was hooked.
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17th Feb 2019 8:35am
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17th Feb 2019 11:31am
What a sweet thing to say, dear Poet HeavenBoy.., thank you for the RL, and the Follow also.
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17th Jun 2019 9:38pm
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18th Feb 2019 1:17pm
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18th Feb 2019 5:02pm
Oh gosh, good morning Sage, what a wonderful surprise! Thank you for stopping by for a read, and sharing!
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