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Erotica
My dreams
projections on a wall
the naked glare
of spliced seams
from which semen falls
runs thru’ my hair
The breach
of parting breakers
as its phase exudes
all tapered reach
thru’ surging acres’
rush precludes
Published 17th Feb 2019
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17th Feb 2019 2:54pm
''of spliced seams
from which semen falls
runs thru’ my hair ''
now that some vivid imagery Jade
very sexy vibe...
from which semen falls
runs thru’ my hair ''
now that some vivid imagery Jade
very sexy vibe...
17th Feb 2019 2:58pm
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17th Feb 2019 8:17pm
Ah yes, makes sense, thank you. The question mark is what gave me pause.
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17th Feb 2019 8:31pm
ahh was simply looking for confirmation if I got the moment right ... to me the next thing after would be something such ... Bless and love ...
17th Feb 2019 8:45pm
17th Feb 2019 4:04pm
Excellent example of how perspective and word choice separates porn from erotica.
17th Feb 2019 8:50pm
Most gracious thanks, dear sister of the Pen, to appreciate and full embrace the difference. Always delighted by your visits.
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17th Feb 2019 6:31pm
17th Feb 2019 9:02pm
Thank you so much, Rjm, for your kind receive and express, and for the inclusion of the piece in a place of honor.
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17th Feb 2019 8:29pm
Your diction always paints such vivid imagery “the breach of parting breakers....”
17th Feb 2019 9:05pm
My gracious thanks to you, Poet Mel, for sharing such thoughts of support and appreciation.
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19th Feb 2019 12:26pm
Beautiful erotica ... love the short lines ... crisp line breaks ... creates such a beautiful flow ... bravo my poetess ...
Aah, my lovely Lil’D, it’s so nice to have you visiting, for a read and to honor me with your thoughts... and the inclusion on your Reading List. I hope all has been going well for you, with my thanks, dear sister.
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20th Feb 2019 9:02pm
Yes... Yes... Yes!
The breach
of parting breakers
as its phase exudes
all tapered reach
thru’ surging acres’
rush precludes
mmmmmmmm- rush precludes!
Yes... Yes... Yes...
The breach
of parting breakers
as its phase exudes
all tapered reach
thru’ surging acres’
rush precludes
mmmmmmmm- rush precludes!
Yes... Yes... Yes...
21st Feb 2019 00:26am
21st Feb 2019 7:10am
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