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So, everyone sucks at something
Fellow poetic travelers,
raise your heart a little higher
for every talent a person has
they are diminished in another
as we all have flaws and vices
keep your eye on your blessings
with your intent elevated
because you are powerful
so we are dangerous and destructive, unless...
I love the flowers, all here bloom
Train
Published 8th Feb 2019
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The world is always beautiful...
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8th Feb 2019 7:22pm
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8th Feb 2019 7:52pm
Fantastic man... was listening to groove and poems appears...just felt like smiling to all the wonderful writers underground...
Jeff
Jeff
8th Feb 2019 7:27pm
dearest Jeff, you're so in tune with the universes
warriors we are...thank you for elevating the cosmic thought
of me and your fellow travelers who are training...
beautiful...
love Brenda❤
warriors we are...thank you for elevating the cosmic thought
of me and your fellow travelers who are training...
beautiful...
love Brenda❤
8th Feb 2019 7:50pm
I am just walking beside you...everyone trains themselves...I am on the groove train...it is the one you hear the beats bumpin'...:)
oxox
Jeff
oxox
Jeff
So much truth my poetic sage ... you say this so soothingly ... with the balm of poetry ... reminding all of us of how special we each are ... thank you my dear poet ...
I was dancing to so much groove today...I felt that if we don't try to love another ...then we hate ourselves...and you know girly, that is what really sucks...
love always
Jeff
love always
Jeff
Anonymous
8th Feb 2019 9:00pm
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8th Feb 2019 9:38pm
Most of the poems are based on drum beats..this was a prog groove...such makes you feel balanced....my friends here are very special...the world never tells them so
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
9th Feb 2019 12:50pm
This wisdom should be on bumper stickers and refrigerator magnets, everywhere!
9th Feb 2019 7:22pm
Thank you very much, my friend,... refrigerator magnets would be so groovy...a total trip...
Jeff
Jeff
10th Feb 2019 2:11pm
I am so touched by this...direct, positive, true and wise...love the way you let your thoughts flow naturally, that's totally different from what you did...I want to read this kind of poems from you more and more...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
11th Feb 2019 6:35am
uplifting to the core, n strikingly reminds of the potential one's lighted with or need to dig in or need to tone tune hone ..that one blinked moment of a slip of watev those cud cost whichev worse..much more your Wise Pithy verses ..of both the sides.. awakening n alerting
loved this Jeff x:)
loved this Jeff x:)
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Anonymous
2nd Dec 2021 2:23pm
Hey Jeff…….luv this powerful positive ink……guess some souls never see the soul within another……RL for me…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd Dec 2021 3:04pm
