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midnight smiles
come within me
touch the ethereal need
let your cares dissipate...
inside carnal desires
reigning over flesh
where pink greed is Queen
and the darkness is God
while I fellatio your words
covet every last syllable dripped
suck your vernacular
until I speak in tongues
spouting hallelujas to the dead gods over poetry
until we see face to face
touch me in ooh's and ahh's
feel me where I live
scribe your thoughts on the stars
so I finally see the man behind the adjectives
who brings me to that place of ecstasy
usually reserved for the divine
cunning linguist
who drops the verse bringing me to my knees
you prowl the corners of my thoughts
licking my vowels
until I cream expletives
you bring me to a whole other level
with midnight smiles
tasting my dawning blush
damn...
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Re. midnight smiles
6th Feb 2019 8:18pm
Re: Re. midnight smiles
6th Feb 2019 9:02pm
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Re: Re. midnight smiles
6th Feb 2019 9:03pm
Re. midnight smiles
6th Feb 2019 9:32pm
over the top in this hot beon compare
lite the inter soul of this man hot and spicy
lovely write
lite the inter soul of this man hot and spicy
lovely write
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Re: Re. midnight smiles
6th Feb 2019 9:34pm
Re. midnight smiles
6th Feb 2019 9:49pm
Love how you find your inspiration, Brenda, And your wordplay adds a comic touch. "Cunning linguist" brings a smile. But you depict the writing process so well otherwise, and I can almost see your "dawning blush." Very well done, and a delight.
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Re: Re. midnight smiles
7th Feb 2019 2:43pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow I really didn't mean to make a bad pun there in my ignorance I didn't know the cunnilingus until after I wrote this lol 😂 aw well giggles it works where I have it anyway...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
Re. midnight smiles
6th Feb 2019 10:27pm
Echo Crowfly. Favourite lines:
you bring me to a whole other level
with midnight smiles
tasting my dawning blush
you bring me to a whole other level
with midnight smiles
tasting my dawning blush
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Re: Re. midnight smiles
7th Feb 2019 2:44pm
Re. midnight smiles
Anonymous
6th Feb 2019 11:23pm
Crimmy,
That's wonderful how you can work your magic on two different planes like that.
Beautiful writing, my friend. You're the best.
Love,
Matthew.
That's wonderful how you can work your magic on two different planes like that.
Beautiful writing, my friend. You're the best.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. midnight smiles
7th Feb 2019 2:45pm
thank you graciously dearest Matthew for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. midnight smiles
6th Feb 2019 11:39pm
Damn is right, crimson. Sweet holy hell..more like a good sapiosexual fucking. You inspire me & challenge the Muse to create such works. She'll likely never touch the badass YOU pull off!!.🌹🥀
Btw you & Ego are filling up my adds these days. Lol. You two are feeding & feuling... I feel the vibes. Hmmm....
Btw you & Ego are filling up my adds these days. Lol. You two are feeding & feuling... I feel the vibes. Hmmm....
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Re: Re. midnight smiles
7th Feb 2019 3:56am
beautiful Pandora you honor me greatly but lovely one you give badass a whole new meaning with the words you conjure... Ego yes he is deeply inspiring and I feel the vibe of his ink... I'm happy we move and inspire you too 🌹
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. midnight smiles
7th Feb 2019 1:25am
Re: Re. midnight smiles
7th Feb 2019 2:45pm
Re. midnight smiles
9th Feb 2019 9:35am
Fuck!!!
This - "who drops the verse bringing me to my knees" Wonderful play there ... Bless and love ...
This - "who drops the verse bringing me to my knees" Wonderful play there ... Bless and love ...
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Re: Re. midnight smiles
11th Feb 2019 4:07pm
thank you graciously dearest Fenyx I love your response... I'm so happy you enjoyed...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤