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John
Your anonymity,
Safely tucked in your name.
Our little secret, I know it's real.
Just like the basement room you rent from your mother.
Persian rugs and antique tables, old family stock,
Lovely back drops for your internet fodder.
You've got this voice...and a filthy mouth,
Illusions growled so eloquently
Through voice memo prompts.
I ask and I receive, my loyal John,
My clean cut, button up Polo jock,
Wielding your big fat American cock.
Safely tucked in your name.
Our little secret, I know it's real.
Just like the basement room you rent from your mother.
Persian rugs and antique tables, old family stock,
Lovely back drops for your internet fodder.
You've got this voice...and a filthy mouth,
Illusions growled so eloquently
Through voice memo prompts.
I ask and I receive, my loyal John,
My clean cut, button up Polo jock,
Wielding your big fat American cock.
Author's Note
The longest fake internet relationship I've ever had. Just playing with words.
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Re. John
4th Feb 2019 2:11am
Re. John
4th Feb 2019 2:50am
Hey, I was really smitten by you. I can't help it that I can't cook or wash for myself. Geeze! 😯
Absolutely love this hard honest write.
Absolutely love this hard honest write.
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Re: Re. John
5th Feb 2019 4:16am
Re. John
4th Feb 2019 3:20am
Brava Loo! It's good to read you again. I love the sarcasm in this piece. Well illustrates the risks of online relationships.
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Re: Re. John
5th Feb 2019 4:08am
Re: Re. John
5th Feb 2019 6:43am
Re. John
4th Feb 2019 4:25am
Some great detail given the fake nature of said relationship. Love the underlying humour. Final line is a kicker.
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Re: Re. John
5th Feb 2019 4:14am
Thank you for the RL! And btw, it's actually all real. Even the giant cock. Never seen anything like it....anaconda. Crazy.
I only mean it's "fake" because he's like a pretend boyfriend. He's a good sport, lol.
I only mean it's "fake" because he's like a pretend boyfriend. He's a good sport, lol.
Re. John
29th Apr 2019 2:17am
Re. John
17th Apr 2021 8:29am
Brilliant...love the interplay of the want and desire along with the impish tone...sinfully naughty
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