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echoed lusts
I echo your lusts
as the waves come crashing in
I succumb...
your undertow pulls me out
I find I'm drowning
then you fill me...
holding me tightly
I wash up on your shores
your pinnacle of trust pierces
my self-doubt...
I rise to greet you
in passion's throes
thrust for thrust...
we wade in the tide
pulled ever deeper;
within our carnal desires
we meet somewhere;
between heaven and hell
you lick my lotus...
blooming for you alone
my petals open to your touch
you enter my garden
the tiller of my Earth
you part the ways
come into me
I am ravaged by your hands
in your embrace, I burn
I cry out...
you hush my protests
whispering "you need this"
then with your knowing hands
you free me...
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Re. echoed lusts
24th Jan 2019 1:56pm
Wonderful romantic write.
It made me think of bio-feedback. Where what we give we receive. Indeed, love is mutually beneficiary.
It made me think of bio-feedback. Where what we give we receive. Indeed, love is mutually beneficiary.
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Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:01am
thank you graciously dearest Snugglebuck I'm so happy you felt this one...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. echoed lusts
24th Jan 2019 1:57pm
Wonderful romantic write.
It made me think of bio-feedback. Where what we give we receive. Indeed, love is mutually beneficiary.
It made me think of bio-feedback. Where what we give we receive. Indeed, love is mutually beneficiary.
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Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:03am
thank you dearest poet you really stirred me deeply with your own poem...I'm happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. echoed lusts
24th Jan 2019 2:41pm
lick my lotus...
We need to hire you a patent lawyer for all these bar drink titles now....
Like a song stuck in my head....
We need to hire you a patent lawyer for all these bar drink titles now....
Like a song stuck in my head....
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Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:05am
thank you graciously dearest RT giggles at patent lawyer wouldn't that be something... I'm happy you found this pleasing...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. echoed lusts
24th Jan 2019 2:51pm
Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:05am
Re. echoed lusts
24th Jan 2019 3:31pm
Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:06am
thank you graciously dearest Tender One so happy you felt this one...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. echoed lusts
Anonymous
24th Jan 2019 3:48pm
I ABSOLUTELY NEED SOME OF THIS
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Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:07am
giggles thank you graciously dearest Ragnar for your enthusiasm... I would desire for you that this happens in your life...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. echoed lusts
24th Jan 2019 3:55pm
Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:08am
thank you graciously dearest Tallen for the love on this write...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. echoed lusts
24th Jan 2019 4:02pm
Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:09am
thank you graciously dearest Lyrical One I'm happy you felt this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. echoed lusts
24th Jan 2019 6:41pm
I loved each sensual line. Every stanza was beautifully stated, but that last one says it ALL!
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Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:10am
thank you graciously beautiful Pandora for such a lovely comment gifting me many smiles... I'm so happy you felt this one...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. echoed lusts
24th Jan 2019 7:41pm
The ebb and flow of this write is inspiring Brenda. Yes your powerful poetry does provide freedom. Thank you. Dx
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Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:12am
thank you graciously dearest David for the love on this write and for picking up on its internal rhythm at first I didn't hear it... then upon reading again, I realized it had one... I'm happy it worked towards enhancing the read...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. echoed lusts
24th Jan 2019 9:26pm
Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:13am
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow I'm so happy you found this one pleasing...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 00:34am
Living by the ocean shore as I listening to the waves. I was taken deep into the sensual passion of your ink, dearest Brenda. Your imagery is so magical it transfers you to rhythm and romance of the ocean and shore becoming one as your lovers feel that pleasure so deeply.💕
I'm astonished by this ink. I plan to read it many times on quiet nights as I listen to the ocean and shore become like your lovers here my dearest Brenda.🌹
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful ROMANTIC passion and. Love. Thank you...Thank you...😁💐💐
Thomas🐺
I'm astonished by this ink. I plan to read it many times on quiet nights as I listen to the ocean and shore become like your lovers here my dearest Brenda.🌹
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful ROMANTIC passion and. Love. Thank you...Thank you...😁💐💐
Thomas🐺
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Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:16am
thank you graciously dearest Thomas I absolutely love the ocean you are truly blessed to live by the water...you deeply beautiful comment moved me greatly...you are always so thoughtful sharing how a write speaks to you personally... I really appreciate that...I cherish your thoughts... I'm happy this spoke to you on another level...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 4:38am
you lick my lotus...
blooming for you alone
my petals open to your touch
you enter my garden
the tiller of my Earth
this was lovely Poetess
blooming for you alone
my petals open to your touch
you enter my garden
the tiller of my Earth
this was lovely Poetess
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Re: Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 11:17am
thank you graciously beautiful Jen for feeling this write you gifted me smiles...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. echoed lusts
25th Jan 2019 6:13pm
Very erotic and spiritual. Imaginative how you intertwined the romance with the surf.
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28th Jan 2019 1:01pm