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Flush It Away
Will democracy
be flushed away like a turd?
A bad day for all.
be flushed away like a turd?
A bad day for all.
Published 22nd Jan 2019
Author's Note
2nd attempt at a Haiku (but people tell me it's a senryu). It's supposed to be expressing the sadness and despair at our behaviour when democracy doesn't go our way.
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22nd Jan 2019 1:45pm
22nd Jan 2019 4:51pm
thanks for your comment ... apologies for the tasteless imagery ...
23rd Jan 2019 10:04pm
Let's hope not... Nice haiku. It seems it already has been...
Thanks for posting!
Thanks for posting!
24th Jan 2019 10:01am
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Feb 2019 2:45am
24th Jan 2019 7:19am
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24th Jan 2019 10:02am
Thanks for the addition to the reading list, I'd be curious to read what you make of my (few) other poems.
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Feb 2019 2:45am
24th Jan 2019 11:40am
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23rd Mar 2019 8:13am
Tasteless imagery I’m afraid fits perfectly with brexit whatever side your on
23rd Mar 2019 8:38am
