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Nothing left to me
Reflection in the mirror
Making the known clearer
Dark Circles from lack of sleep
Empty eyes allowing all to see
There is nothing left to me
I walk the street at night
Cigarette and light
Staring at the sky
Scenery sparking memories
Tears fall to no end
No one can fix this broken man
Never will I hope again
This sadness has no end
Now that happiness is dead
Lost in thought I grow deaf
Smiles lost in the mess
What’s the point of living
When nothings left…?
There isn’t…there just isn’t
Making the known clearer
Dark Circles from lack of sleep
Empty eyes allowing all to see
There is nothing left to me
I walk the street at night
Cigarette and light
Staring at the sky
Scenery sparking memories
Tears fall to no end
No one can fix this broken man
Never will I hope again
This sadness has no end
Now that happiness is dead
Lost in thought I grow deaf
Smiles lost in the mess
What’s the point of living
When nothings left…?
There isn’t…there just isn’t
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I feel the sadsness within...
Anonymous
16th Nov 2011 5:59am
I have felt a lot of this myself. I can relate. I wonder what's left for me? I love poems that ask questions, because I myself, am a deep thinker and analyzer of life and everything around me. The hardest things to get over, are not the hurdles that present themselves in life, but those obstacles that come from within. Those are the hardest of all to conquer...This is reading list material, and as such will make it there. :)
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re: I feel the sadsness within...
16th Nov 2011 6:21am
Your words have left much for me to think about..Its and honor to be a voice in your list
I hope you one day you and i can both overcome those obstacles.. and witness what is left :) thankyou
I hope you one day you and i can both overcome those obstacles.. and witness what is left :) thankyou
Scenery sparking memories
16th Nov 2011 9:03am
Its so weird how certain things really bring u back to a certain time in life. times of year usually does it to me..like the beginning of a season. nice
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re: Scenery sparking memories
16th Nov 2011 9:20am
re: re: Scenery sparking memories
22nd Nov 2011 10:00am
ME TOO. Early summer mornings for some reason too. Rainy fall days not so good memories hey at least it goes with the whether.lol
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A page out of my life
16th Nov 2011 5:45pm
This is beautifully put.
"What’s the point of living
When nothings left…?"
I ask myself this often, the only reason I'm alive is so I don't hurt the ones I love.
I hope you can find peace.
"What’s the point of living
When nothings left…?"
I ask myself this often, the only reason I'm alive is so I don't hurt the ones I love.
I hope you can find peace.
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Nothing left to me
16th Nov 2011 7:51pm
This is my first venture for comment. I find the writing haunting in that it conveys the feeling of emptiness.It is I find difficult to describe such feelings ,the whole text must be truly empty
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re: Nothing left to me
16th Nov 2011 9:54pm
Hi
17th Nov 2011 3:23am
Emptiness
17th Nov 2011 2:52pm
Sometimes in long periods and sometimes in short. I think we feel most empty bc everything is so vast; so much to grasp, understand, know, feel, to want... etc.
It surely makes one wonder what is Right for oneself: the purpose, the reason, the point? Concluding almost always that everything is meaningless and nothing matters hence an empty vessel in a world filled with other empty vessels :s
I view it as an illusion and just a introspective lapse we experience to further gain an unattainable wisdom we strive to achieve.
..Thinking too much! Enjoy the simple pleasures of life like breathing sweet smelling coffee or the stretch you make when you get outa bed. As they say its Little things which Matter.
[Rubix]
It surely makes one wonder what is Right for oneself: the purpose, the reason, the point? Concluding almost always that everything is meaningless and nothing matters hence an empty vessel in a world filled with other empty vessels :s
I view it as an illusion and just a introspective lapse we experience to further gain an unattainable wisdom we strive to achieve.
..Thinking too much! Enjoy the simple pleasures of life like breathing sweet smelling coffee or the stretch you make when you get outa bed. As they say its Little things which Matter.
[Rubix]
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wow
Anonymous
28th Nov 2011 6:31am
the feeling of being alone and empty is so saddening and yet the words when written down can be so beautifully put...well done
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wow
Anonymous
21st Dec 2011 5:02pm
amazing read!
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Re: Nothing left to me
6th Sep 2012 7:05pm