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Cloven
Eight thousand words a day from my mouth flew,
Soar higher in the sky and dropped like dew,
But three of them I rescue : "I love You".
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Josh Berry. Ancestral Pen. Ancestral Form. Cloven
Inspired by " Act of Vengeance " (2017) an American Movie.
Published 16th Jan 2019
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16th Jan 2019 11:11pm
Loved the 10-syllabic rhythm and rhyme. Soaring poetry, uplifting! Best Regards...
26th Jan 2019 9:41pm
Thanks dear poet...
Actually, the 10 syllabic rhythm is my form of poetry...
Its entitled Ancestral form...
It goes with 3 lines(max/min), 10 syllables per line and a single rhyme scheme...
Actually, the 10 syllabic rhythm is my form of poetry...
Its entitled Ancestral form...
It goes with 3 lines(max/min), 10 syllables per line and a single rhyme scheme...
