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It's Almost a Goodbye, My Love
It was a love that was true and one visibly known at first sight
Looking into his eyes, I knew he'd forever be mine; an impact on my life, he's made
I fought for his life and many times has he helped me in my own plight
When my body was weak and my
bed it's only refuge; by my side, he's laid Loyalty beyond words is just one of the sweetest blessings he's brought
With tears, I'll remember his presence most when it's my bodies next time to battle and fight
How do I prepare myself to let go of such a Godsend and treasure, I just can't fathom the thought
As it's soon time to say goodbye to a love that was true and one visibly known at first sight
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 15th Jan 2019
| Edited 16th Mar 2019
Author's Note
Update... Scooter has since past
Preparing for a pets death that I know is soon to come. Sigh. You may see references in the comments about my photo selection, but since then, I've replaced it with the real deal in action a few years back.
Preparing for a pets death that I know is soon to come. Sigh. You may see references in the comments about my photo selection, but since then, I've replaced it with the real deal in action a few years back.
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Re. It's Almost a Goodbye, My Love
15th Jan 2019 3:13am
Losing a pet is one of the hardest things to go thru. There is just pure love
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15th Jan 2019 3:15am
I agree with you wholeheartedly, my friend. If only they could live forever.
Re. It's Almost a Goodbye, My Love
15th Jan 2019 3:14am
AS soon as I started reading this it brought back quite a few times I have known this feeling as well in my life. Always so so hard to say goodbye to a pet in that they become so much of ones life. Great write and just have to keep this one so on the reading list it goes : )
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15th Jan 2019 3:25am
Thank you so very much for the empathy and add. It means a lot to me. I lost one unexpectedly a few months back and atleast I have time to prepare if such a thing exists. I've rescued and lost so many and it sure hasn't gotten any easier. Thanks again!!
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2019 3:34am
Truly a very emotional write. It's a pain that whoever loves the innocence of trustworthy creature is bound to go through. I too have my two girls, one of which is showing the pains and weakness of age. She's always a baby to me, even now that she is close to her 9th year of age. It will break my heart but I can only say that life is a bitter journey. Hugs J
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15th Jan 2019 5:59am
Life is indeed a very bitter journey, but atleast we are granted a small but precious amount of time to know and feel the greatest love of all. I understand your pain too, it's something we all start to dread quickly when they're such a blessed lifeline to people like us. Thank you and hugs back, J
Re. It's Almost a Goodbye, My Love
15th Jan 2019 4:08am
This was beautiful to read, it brings up all the feelings I've been feeling anyway lately because my pomeranian is 13 years old and I know the end is coming. She's frailer than she used to be, and has little old lady warts the same as my first dog who died 3 years ago. It's so sad to think a being who's been in your life and who's loved you so much will be gone soon. Lucy is sweet to everyone, and she likes to be by herself but she's really playful when she feels like it and will throw sticks in the air. She always comes to me to let her out, even if I'm 4 rooms away and there's someone else right there with her haha. And when I wake up around 9 AM she'll be waiting at my door for her 'second breakfast' xD What's your pet like?
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15th Jan 2019 7:14pm
Thank you for reading and commenting, plus sharing your story..I love that. I'm sorry you're experiencing the same thoughts though, they're a killer! I have 3 rescue kitties left. 1 is 8 and hates humans. Lol. One is a 14 year old snazzy sassy one who sings/cries all day..this cat is 13 and 1/2 and has had an eye removed and the other is now in bad shape. The worst is he's developed calcifications that are growing quickly. He's on prednisone and acts like a kitten but we he doesn't anymore, then it's time. Thank you for asking!
Re. It's Almost a Goodbye, My Love
15th Jan 2019 4:16am
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15th Jan 2019 7:15pm
Re. It's Almost a Goodbye, My Love
15th Jan 2019 6:01am
I'm so sorry for your pain, it is like losing a family member to lose a loved pet. My thoughts are with you.
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Re: Re. It's Almost a Goodbye, My Love
15th Jan 2019 7:16pm
Thank you..its sad that it's almost worse than or as bad as losing people
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15th Jan 2019 7:19pm
If you put your heart and love into it then it's species is irrelevant, friendship can blossom and be just as strong with a non human animal. Never feel guilty for loving and feeling hurt when the object of your love passes.
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Re. It's Almost a Goodbye, My Love
Beautiful read. I did not connotate this with a pet until your words at the end but I can understand how much emotion the passing of much loved pet animal (what is yours?) can be, especially when seen in women pet owners.
I don't know if you have read CS Lewis' 'The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe' but the picture reminded me of the sacrifice of Aslan the Lion who was a friend to the child characters.
I don't know if you have read CS Lewis' 'The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe' but the picture reminded me of the sacrifice of Aslan the Lion who was a friend to the child characters.
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15th Jan 2019 7:20pm
Oh wow. I'll check into that. I used to call him my lil lion so it felt right. I actually intended for it to be humanlike because it is just the same... Sigh..I wish we could post pics beneath writing for imagination purposes. Thank you, Solomon_Song
Re. It's Almost a Goodbye, My Love
15th Jan 2019 9:15am
I feel your pain. Loss of a beloved pet is like looking a child. Our pets give us true unconditional love. My deep hearted condolences dear.🙏😢🌹
CS Lewis' 'The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe' as Solomon said truly matches your picture and a must read...😊
Wolfman🐺
CS Lewis' 'The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe' as Solomon said truly matches your picture and a must read...😊
Wolfman🐺
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Re: Re. It's Almost a Goodbye, My Love
15th Jan 2019 7:22pm
You're absolutely correct and thank you for the add. I'll look into the story too
I'm sure I'll be writing once he's officially gone too.
I'm sure I'll be writing once he's officially gone too.
Re: Re. It's Almost a Goodbye, My Love
15th Jan 2019 9:27pm
We all are here for you dear friend. 😊🌹
Praying for you and your pet.🙏💐
Wolfman🐺
Praying for you and your pet.🙏💐
Wolfman🐺
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15th Jan 2019 12:59pm
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15th Jan 2019 7:30pm
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2019 3:26pm
Oh Pandora,
So sorry. That's the worst. Pets are better than most people, only love and devotion, and sweetness.
My heart's with you.
Love,
Matthew.
So sorry. That's the worst. Pets are better than most people, only love and devotion, and sweetness.
My heart's with you.
Love,
Matthew.
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15th Jan 2019 7:24pm
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2019 7:31pm
Thank you, Pandora. I just say what's in my heart(I think that's why I scare everyone off), but I'm just friendly.
Anyway, you've really got a sweet heart. Animal lovers can usually be trusted.
Take care,
Matthew.
Anyway, you've really got a sweet heart. Animal lovers can usually be trusted.
Take care,
Matthew.
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