deepundergroundpoetry.com
little sub
the sultry call of my submission
open for your pleasure alone
I understand my role
on my knees before you
pink peeking from my bodice
hardened from my deep need
to please you Sir
command my affections
as I take you deep
into my mouth
lapping at your hardness
you wrap your hand in my hair
a roughness that makes me creamy
your gruffness brings out my playful
I swirl, bite, and suck
you take a taste of my honey
sweet candied delight
little hole tight and inviting
you bend me over
then take me hard
inside my darkness
moans of approval escape me
you ride me into the night
come morning light
you cum deep inside
sweet release
at the hands of a Master
I am utterly owned
my lover and keeper
Author's Note
inspired by beautiful Soulzgirl69
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 16
reading list entries 5
comments 23
reads 966
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
13th Jan 2019 6:11pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 6:16pm
thank you dearest poet this is just a playful write...
let my naughty little sub side out...
love Brenda 💕
let my naughty little sub side out...
love Brenda 💕
Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 6:25pm
Very hot piece. It is truly a feast today for those of us who love poetry of submissive partners. Great work.
1
Re: Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 6:31pm
thank you graciously dearest RJM I was already feeling naughty when I wrote soul seduction then I read beautiful Soulz and was inspired to let my submissive side show...
I'm happy you found it pleasing...
love Brenda 💕
I'm happy you found it pleasing...
love Brenda 💕
Re. little sub
Anonymous
13th Jan 2019 6:33pm
Oh hell yes. Fantastic and brilliantly sexy.
So happy I gave a little naughty inspiration.🤗
So happy I gave a little naughty inspiration.🤗
1
Re: Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 6:35pm
giggles thank you beautiful Soulz for bringing out my playful side today...you made today brighter 🌹
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. little sub
Anonymous
13th Jan 2019 6:38pm
Hugs 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
1
Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 7:01pm
Re: Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 7:13pm
Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 7:21pm
Liked it so much. Beautiful submission, utterly consensual intercourse.
1
Re: Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 7:22pm
thank you graciously dearest Andreas I'm so happy you found this pleasurable...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 7:55pm
you naughty girl heated this soul
just the read made me want to see more
very hot and juicy
nice work
just the read made me want to see more
very hot and juicy
nice work
1
Re: Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 8:23pm
thank you graciously dearest Nutbuster so happy you found this pleasing...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 8:20pm
She inspires some wonderful, unbridled thoughts. A lovely tribute! This has left me pleasantly distracted.
1
Re: Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 8:25pm
thank you graciously dearest Tender One indeed she does 😊 I'm happy you felt this one...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 8:30pm
Re: Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 8:31pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly for the love on this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 9:52pm
Pure delight. I love both your dark and playful side. This one has a light touch, and the erotica is both amusing and a turn on. You have such versatility, Brenda. You can both submit and raise some hell now and then.
2
Re: Re. little sub
13th Jan 2019 9:55pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow for the love you show all my various sides...you gifted me smiles today...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. little sub
My dearest Brenda you my dear you ink awakened my master side I seldom show or feel...😉
So naughty, enticing, pleasuring, erotic imagery...🌹
My breathing quickened and my blood burn hot in my pounding heart...
OMG...my minds eye is passionately spinning with eroticism...😉🎆
love Thomas 🐺💗
So naughty, enticing, pleasuring, erotic imagery...🌹
My breathing quickened and my blood burn hot in my pounding heart...
OMG...my minds eye is passionately spinning with eroticism...😉🎆
love Thomas 🐺💗
1
Re. little sub
14th Jan 2019 2:04am
Captured your total enjoyment of being a sub; expressed in an erotic manner. I had to look up bodice and now I know a new word.
1
Re. little sub
15th Jan 2019 2:26am
"I am utterly owned
my lover and keeper"...
You topped this vibe off nicely. ..
1
Re. little sub
15th Jan 2019 7:02am