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Grossed Out
Deleted a couple of poems today
cuz they grossed me out, and
I fear my next one will have the same affect.
Since this is #143......again
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Re. Grossed Out
12th Jan 2019 5:49am
I hate to hear you're deleting your poems. I do hope you've saved them somewhere.
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Re: Re. Grossed Out
12th Jan 2019 7:06pm
Just cleaning up, taking out the trash. Possibly some rewrites slumbering.
They're tucked away for now.
* I even revised this, (after the wine wore off). :-)
They're tucked away for now.
* I even revised this, (after the wine wore off). :-)
Re: Re. Grossed Out
21st Jan 2019 6:04am
Re: Re. Grossed Out
21st Jan 2019 6:21am
Life, learning, and reflecting can have a way of changing ones perspective. In this matter, both my feelings on the poems and the number I've written intersected, so, I felt the title was fitting for both in a humous way.
Re: Re. Grossed Out
12th Jan 2019 7:07pm
Re: Re. Grossed Out
12th Jan 2019 7:12pm
you were in my wiped clean opinion Sis... but again your art...and as our dearest mutual friend here Sez...your gallery...
:-) i reckon DU is as close to a judgement free zone as we can get...practically...(just like dettol nothing 100 100%
:-) i reckon DU is as close to a judgement free zone as we can get...practically...(just like dettol nothing 100 100%
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Re: Re. Grossed Out
12th Jan 2019 7:36pm
True, true, true,
that you've said of DU
Though at times age does dismiss
what you thought then once was bliss.
that you've said of DU
Though at times age does dismiss
what you thought then once was bliss.
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- Edited 19th Feb 2019 4:45am
20th Jan 2019 7:03am
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Re: Re. Grossed Out
20th Jan 2019 6:42pm
long as them holes don't gross anyone out. but then...
10 years...I've got sags older than that.
10 years...I've got sags older than that.
Re. Grossed Out
21st Jan 2019 4:24pm
Sometimes we must go through our work. Looking forward to reading new writes...xo
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Re: Re. Grossed Out
21st Jan 2019 5:07pm
Time constraints coupled with writer's block limit my posting of new pieces on a regular basis, though I do enjoy the opportunities to do so when afforded.
As to editing or deleting current pieces, that is always at the writer's prerogative as circumstances can change over time.
Thank you for stopping by.
As to editing or deleting current pieces, that is always at the writer's prerogative as circumstances can change over time.
Thank you for stopping by.
Re. Grossed Out
22nd Jan 2019 11:19am
Only thing grossing me out here is you NOT posting more! :) but hey I hear ya n ur forgiven always :)
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Re: Re. Grossed Out
24th Jan 2019 5:12pm
Geesh!, can't a gal catch a break!!!
If I post another poem, I'll be grossed out...again, and if I don't, you'll be grossed.
What to do? What to do.?
Guess I'll have to learn the Metric system. :-)
If I post another poem, I'll be grossed out...again, and if I don't, you'll be grossed.
What to do? What to do.?
Guess I'll have to learn the Metric system. :-)