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Glimpses of the Universe
As we lie together and watch the sunrise,
Wisps of colorful clouds paint the violet-blue skies;
Such extraordinary beauty, reflected in your eyes,
In a moment that only the gods could devise.
Wisps of colorful clouds paint the violet-blue skies;
Such extraordinary beauty, reflected in your eyes,
In a moment that only the gods could devise.
Published 2nd Jan 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
2nd Jan 2019 2:33am
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2nd Jan 2019 2:58am
Thank you, Bryan, for your wonderful compliment; I really appreciate it!
2nd Jan 2019 4:00am
There is something about this writing that feels uncannily familiar. I have no idea why. Could it be that language works in mysterious ways?
2nd Jan 2019 4:59am
I suppose familiarity a good thing. Thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Velvet :)
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2019 5:47am
Hey,
That's great New B. I'm glad you stopped by mine. Sometimes you miss people unless they come by.
Nice write.
MZ.
That's great New B. I'm glad you stopped by mine. Sometimes you miss people unless they come by.
Nice write.
MZ.
2nd Jan 2019 4:23pm
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, Matthew. I'm glad your didn't miss me :p
5th Jan 2019 2:13pm
5th Jan 2019 8:17pm
Thanks so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. I wrote this one years ago, but 'refound' it on my old laptop and decided to post it. Since many others seem to enjoy it, I'm glad that I did :)
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Dec 2023 7:45pm
6th Jan 2019 9:21pm
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6th Jan 2019 9:50pm
Thank you for the compliments, and for taking the time to write out such a meaningful and heartfelt comment. I really appreciate that :)
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Jul 2019 12:45pm
14th Jan 2019 6:40am
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14th Jan 2019 10:18am
You are very kind! Thanks so much for the kind words, and for to taking time to read my poems. Your compliments are uplifting :).
I'm happy also that you are enjoying it here at DU!
I'm happy also that you are enjoying it here at DU!
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
22nd Jan 2019 11:49am
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22nd Jan 2019 12:10pm
It means a lot, Danny. Thanks for dropping by and leaving a nice compliment!
Anonymous
30th Jan 2019 6:36pm
This is such a calming picture. A peaceful love is what I sense.
30th Jan 2019 6:42pm
Thanks for your feedback, Scorpion. I tried to paint a picture with my words here - so I am glad that you can see it :).
15th Feb 2019 5:03pm
16th Feb 2019 2:10am
23rd Dec 2019 4:16am
I love the gentle honesty of this. It feels ever so soft, this moment in time.
2nd May 2023 5:41pm
i hope one day, when we as humans get our shit together, i might SEE what You have seen in the skies.
But for now, it's only an illusion as i live in smog filled populated areas and my skies are beautiful
oranges, pinks, and scattered reds and yellows.
But for now, it's only an illusion as i live in smog filled populated areas and my skies are beautiful
oranges, pinks, and scattered reds and yellows.
