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Sleeping in The Forest (Make Earth Your Heaven)

Mother-Earth remembered her,
She took Mary back so tenderly.
Like the willow tree, her mother’s hair swayed so gracefully.
Mother nature’s tune humming as she blanketed her in leaves so lovingly.

She slept as never before, a breeze billowing her bedroom curtains,
nothing between her and the white streaks of falling stars.
Her childhood dreams feathered as Autumn leaves
beneath her favorite tree branch.

The small kingdoms of insects in her bedchamber
buzzing throughout the moonlit hours.
Mother always said at bedtime, “make earth your heaven.”
Geese and swans outside her bedroom window whirring in their song.

Tossing, turning and tearing at night,
coping with the glow of yellow, eerie moonlight.
By morning the swans had carried her away many times
into the sun of her serene dreams, leaving the moon-glow.


#MaryOliver
Written by gothicsurrealism (Daniel Long)
Published
Author's Note
This was an inspiration by Mary Oliver's "Sleeping in The Forest"
for the Classic Corner tribute comp "Bone."
This is the first draft and there will be revisions. I'm opened to honest critique!
My poetry/short story website: www.gothicsurrealism.com
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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