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immortal
a nothing writer...
writing myself into no noteworthy book
I write because I must
my soul aches with the words
when I sleep they press in on me
demanding I free them
I fight with them
yes, fight
I want to bend um
make them say what I want
they come out as is
they don't budge
I can color them any way I want
still the black and white of it is there
the truth can't be denied
you can't break words
they aren't given to human frailty
they are immortal
will live on long after I die
they will survive
are fighters
brawl for their right on the page
to stand in the light
and for a moment enter a person's mind
then shared to another and another
speaking to hearts
changing one's thoughts
making history by breaking rules
they are rebels
they won't conform
they live like this moment is all they've got
because I'm a nothing writer
and this moment is all they have
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Re. immortal
1st Jan 2019 2:14pm
Such truth in this. Even when I try to curb that writer's voice, it can overtake everything else. It is a great thing to write for one's self, to respect that unique voice. A lovely examination. Very much felt this line:
"my soul aches with the words
when I sleep they press in on me
demanding I free them "
"my soul aches with the words
when I sleep they press in on me
demanding I free them "
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Re: Re. immortal
1st Jan 2019 2:16pm
thank you graciously dearest Tender One for feeling this write... as only a writer can truly...
Happy New Year ✨
love Brenda 💕
Happy New Year ✨
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. immortal
1st Jan 2019 2:30pm
Re. immortal
1st Jan 2019 3:48pm
Brenda, I love the way your words fight for their right to be chosen to 'live' on your page. What a fabulous thought!
David x
David x
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1st Jan 2019 3:53pm
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1st Jan 2019 7:47pm
Re. immortal
Anonymous
1st Jan 2019 7:13pm
Oh dearest Brenda I feel this so deeply with you.
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Re: Re. immortal
1st Jan 2019 7:48pm
thank you graciously beautiful Soulz for feeling this one so deeply...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. immortal
1st Jan 2019 8:59pm
yes we have this problem with words, but that is why we like them. They refuse to break as you say, and the hardness and stubbornness if freaking addictive. Nice
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Re: Re. immortal
1st Jan 2019 10:19pm
thank you graciously dearest I IS ME I like them too... I think I will keep them...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. immortal
1st Jan 2019 9:33pm
It is a struggle to put stubborn words in works of power and effectiveness. You somehow manage both. An excellent write, dear Brenda.
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Re: Re. immortal
1st Jan 2019 10:20pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow for finding power in mine...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. immortal
2nd Jan 2019 4:19am
Re: Re. immortal
3rd Jan 2019 2:20pm
thank you graciously dearest Daniel for feeling my softer side here...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. immortal
2nd Jan 2019 4:19am
Re: Re. immortal
3rd Jan 2019 2:21pm
thank you graciously dearest Lawrence for understanding this write the way only a writer can...
love Brenda ✨
love Brenda ✨
Re. immortal
2nd Jan 2019 1:52pm
Wonderful write about writing ... bravo my poetess ... Happy New Year ...
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Re: Re. immortal
3rd Jan 2019 2:22pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly may this new year bring you many blessings...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. immortal
2nd Jan 2019 4:18pm
Powerful and cathartic....
I love reading you Crim
we can always see the transparent truth of all you write
Pen Praise
XOXO
FIRE
I love reading you Crim
we can always see the transparent truth of all you write
Pen Praise
XOXO
FIRE
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Re: Re. immortal
3rd Jan 2019 2:22pm
thank you graciously beautiful Fire for feeling my ink so deeply...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. immortal
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2019 1:37pm
Does it seem sometimes as though the pressure to get the words out is so great that once the flood slows there will be nothing left of us? It's that pressure that gets us. I love you, my beautiful Dark Angel...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. immortal
3rd Jan 2019 2:24pm
thank you graciously beautiful Willow yes that's it exactly...you understand perfectly the way only a writer can....
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹
I love you...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. immortal
9th Feb 2019 00:50am
Re: Re. immortal
9th Feb 2019 1:55am
Anonymous
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27th Apr 2019 8:02pm
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