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Words Fail
I sit here, begin to write
But my words, of late, begin to fail
My ideas wretched in the night
And the words produced are fully stale
So here's more on a writer's block
The slow fail at the keyboard
I contemplate, my mind on lock
Believing readers will be bored
Still I waver, and I try
But come up with mediocrity
I settle back and breathe a sigh
Yet my mind won't listen to a plea
Still I can't resist a rhyme
A semblance of rhythm, hard to seize
I find that I have abundant time
And dread the advent of a freeze.
But my words, of late, begin to fail
My ideas wretched in the night
And the words produced are fully stale
So here's more on a writer's block
The slow fail at the keyboard
I contemplate, my mind on lock
Believing readers will be bored
Still I waver, and I try
But come up with mediocrity
I settle back and breathe a sigh
Yet my mind won't listen to a plea
Still I can't resist a rhyme
A semblance of rhythm, hard to seize
I find that I have abundant time
And dread the advent of a freeze.
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31st Dec 2018 00:21am
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31st Dec 2018 9:25pm
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2018 2:41am
My dear friend, forgive me for not having spoken much of late, but I confess that I had to stop and think. I am truly lucky as, after months I have started writing in Italian again and my poem should see the light on another site I've been writing for the last ten years. I'm hoping to translate it and publish it here, if it doesn't loose in translation. But, as I said many times, you are the writer of the impossible and whatever you do it becomes great. This write is no different. Hugs j
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31st Dec 2018 9:29pm
I may have said this before, but you're a master of both poetry and commentary. You reveal much about yourself while offering encouragement. Good luck with that translation, and thank you for the kindness.
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2018 10:12pm
Happy New year my dear friend. You are truly a great soul. Hugs J.
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31st Dec 2018 2:52am
Hey Crow.......how I know this feeling.......probably every writer does.......I must say your words have not failed.......you’ve written an emotion here so elequently.......BRAVO! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
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31st Dec 2018 9:31pm
Thank you Flower. Your words, as always, mean so much to me. You're a gentle soul, proffering your luv.
Re. Words Fail
31st Dec 2018 5:25am
Brilliant work, if this is you with a writer's block then I am envious indeed 😊.
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31st Dec 2018 9:35pm
I had mixed feelings writing this, as always. I rarely suffer a paralyzing block, just the kind of self doubt that makes me wonder if I'm here over my head. Thank you for the support and kindness. I needed that.
Re. Words Fail
31st Dec 2018 2:07pm
My dearest crowfly friend, take heart, stand at ease, and smoke an imaginary cigarette. Many writers understand the situation of which you speak - and written, with your unfailing & familiar poet’s voice. You & I have discussed this sort of dilemma often, and we know that this too passes.
So do not fret for very long,
Your faithful muse will stay in touch.
Please ne’er forget there’s nothing wrong,
For writer’s block, there’s no thing such.😉
Jadey😘
My love to Ninja.
So do not fret for very long,
Your faithful muse will stay in touch.
Please ne’er forget there’s nothing wrong,
For writer’s block, there’s no thing such.😉
Jadey😘
My love to Ninja.
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31st Dec 2018 9:37pm
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31st Dec 2018 7:02pm
An excellent expression of this very relatable feeling. I enjoyed your poem :)
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31st Dec 2018 9:40pm
Thank you NewBeginnings. I hope you don't suffer writer's block often, but you do relate. Now I don't feel so alone.
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31st Dec 2018 7:03pm
dearest Sir Crow we all go through this
you are never stale or boring
we love you...
my apologies at being away
I was dreadfully sick...
Happy New Year my friend...
love Brenda 💕
you are never stale or boring
we love you...
my apologies at being away
I was dreadfully sick...
Happy New Year my friend...
love Brenda 💕
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31st Dec 2018 9:45pm
I'm glad your sickness has passed, Brenda. Mine is usually in the head and sticks around.
Happy New Year, lovely friend.
Happy New Year, lovely friend.