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Awaiting the Hour
( a Renga = linked haiki/senryu )
my thoughts in winter
though life is so uncertain,
the new year is sure
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when the still hours
lingering before sunrise
are the loneliest
<>•<>
the middle of night,
there’s no ‘you’ to climb into
a soft warm bed with
my thoughts in winter
though life is so uncertain,
the new year is sure
<>•<>
when the still hours
lingering before sunrise
are the loneliest
<>•<>
the middle of night,
there’s no ‘you’ to climb into
a soft warm bed with
Published 30th Dec 2018
Author's Note
Entered in the Deep competition “New Year’s Haiku”, hosted by MadameLavender.
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Anonymous
30th Dec 2018 9:27pm
Beautiful Jadey. So sweet, yet sad.
You're wonderful, my friend.
Love,
Matthew.
You're wonderful, my friend.
Love,
Matthew.
30th Dec 2018 9:50pm
1st Jan 2019 6:50am
Beautifully intimate and yet with a mystery. Wonderful marriage of the two. Always a pleasure.
Daniel
Daniel
1st Jan 2019 11:49am
8th Jan 2019 3:40am
aawww i know this feeling my beautiful, i know it too well
hugging you tightly and true<3
hugging you tightly and true<3
8th Jan 2019 3:59am
Anonymous
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24th Jan 2019 3:30pm
*blushes*
Gosh, Poet - my gracious thanks for your generosity & words of support. I do hope you’ll try, and I welcome you warmly to the Deep.
Gosh, Poet - my gracious thanks for your generosity & words of support. I do hope you’ll try, and I welcome you warmly to the Deep.
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Feb 2019 2:45am
25th Jan 2019 4:56am
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