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Winter walk
My soul floats before me on the frosted air
Senses witness still beauty
Feet crunching across blue-tinged moon shadows
Jolly multi-coloured lights peek from blanketed bushes
Tiny tracks tell stories of the hidden creatures beneath
I drift above it all
unknown
Published 21st Dec 2018
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21st Dec 2018 7:08pm
lovely poem.... I love your choice of words and the way the words flow with so much ease
22nd Dec 2018 11:18pm
21st Dec 2018 8:57pm
22nd Dec 2018 11:19pm
Thanks! :)
Life has been slamming me with every busy distraction imaginable. Hoping to spend a little more time with the muse...
Life has been slamming me with every busy distraction imaginable. Hoping to spend a little more time with the muse...
21st Dec 2018 11:01pm
Bravisima Titanium! You capture so well the sensations. I can hear the soft whisper in the trees as the snow falls. Thrilling!
22nd Dec 2018 11:20pm
22nd Dec 2018 7:00am
Snaps.
the rendering. Of winter
the place and the feeling.
Thank you dear poetess for taking us there.
Gem.
the rendering. Of winter
the place and the feeling.
Thank you dear poetess for taking us there.
Gem.
22nd Dec 2018 11:22pm
22nd Dec 2018 11:25pm
:-) yes it did... if i wasn't for the lovely rain...i would've been there or somewhere where the cold's at lol
25th Dec 2018 3:40pm
The winter snow can be so magical, an inspiration for words so beautifully hemmed together as you have here. Great write bt!
25th Dec 2018 7:09pm
Thank you! Sadly our snow is all gone now, but I'm hoping it will come back....
