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Reprieve
He feels that he is crumbling
One piece falling with each day
So he reasons that his time is out
And Death will come collect
He waits and hears the darkness knock
Feels the winter breath of cold
He murmurs still another prayer
Lamenting a vast and sordid past
He speaks of his many crimes
Several vicious pursuits
Those he harmed along the way
The bones left graying in the dust
He can feel the night retreat
And daylight edging slowly in
The grave is going to have to wait
Grieving at this new delay.
One piece falling with each day
So he reasons that his time is out
And Death will come collect
He waits and hears the darkness knock
Feels the winter breath of cold
He murmurs still another prayer
Lamenting a vast and sordid past
He speaks of his many crimes
Several vicious pursuits
Those he harmed along the way
The bones left graying in the dust
He can feel the night retreat
And daylight edging slowly in
The grave is going to have to wait
Grieving at this new delay.
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Anonymous
19th Dec 2018 11:13pm
You've depicted how my soul feels lately. This is one of the most beautiful poems of regret I've ever read and you have touched my soul. J
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19th Dec 2018 11:21pm
You honor me, J. I'm glad this moved you to your soul. If this gave you a lift, all the better. May your darkness be dispelled. Thank you for the praise, and the RL entry!
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19th Dec 2018 11:15pm
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19th Dec 2018 11:24pm
Thank you JusTim. I'm trying to duck death as long as possible. If he knocks, I won't reply. Wish me luck.
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Anonymous
19th Dec 2018 11:21pm
You are a born writer, Sir Crow!
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19th Dec 2018 11:27pm
Thank you so much, Catman. DUP has given me quite an education. If I was born this way I still need to study. Your work is included in the lesson.
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Anonymous
20th Dec 2018 3:40pm
Like everybody elses, of course. We learn as we go on in life.
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20th Dec 2018 6:54am
Bravo Sir Crow! You have channelled Poe in this piece. Thank goodness your coil shuffling is delayed. 😀
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20th Dec 2018 11:49pm
You honor me Gahdess. I was thinking of Poe as I began this. I'm glad you noticed his presence in some details. I just wish this crowfly could do something like "The Raven." Thank you!
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20th Dec 2018 11:50am
This feels to me, Crow, like one of your most 'solid' writes yet. A new level of authentic poetic expression. Hugs, Josh.
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20th Dec 2018 11:51pm
So glad it pleased you Josh. I am trying for some solidity in theme and execution. Steer clear of the mediocrity. It's the least I can do.
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20th Dec 2018 12:04pm
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20th Dec 2018 11:52pm
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20th Dec 2018 1:04pm
It's so much easier to remember our regrets and short comings than our successes. Keep fighting the good fight.
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20th Dec 2018 11:54pm
I will, and you're right about fighting the good fight. It's the best way to survive.
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20th Dec 2018 3:35pm
dearest Sir Crow true feeling written so masterfully...
yes, death will have to wait...
excellent...
love Brenda ❤
yes, death will have to wait...
excellent...
love Brenda ❤
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20th Dec 2018 11:55pm
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20th Dec 2018 9:27pm
Your poems are like sunbeams to me, illuminating my dark corner of the world. So when the ‘woman in black’ comes knocking, please don’t let her in! :)
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20th Dec 2018 11:57pm
So glad to shine a light! If it's directed at you, all the better. I'm happy to oblige, dear Velvet.
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21st Dec 2018 11:42am
I felt like that a few days ago, and have been feeling it of and on for a while. Being ill is not a happy time. Good read, Crowfly,
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