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Rain on Reminisce
As two releases collide while sipping
Dipping, sinking, Karma interlocking, gripping
Butterfly Net sealed captured for infinity bliss
Rain showers now on such a beautiful reminisce
Sun come back out and kiss my cheek once again with silent bliss
Dipping, sinking, Karma interlocking, gripping
Butterfly Net sealed captured for infinity bliss
Rain showers now on such a beautiful reminisce
Sun come back out and kiss my cheek once again with silent bliss
Published 14th Dec 2018
| Edited 20th Mar 2022
Author's Note
I started thinking about how rain is depicted in illustrations. In comics that use gouache or watercolor, they use light blue, so I started using that color
Lucien Smith
Lucien Smith
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14th Dec 2018 4:23am
Nice one Miss Kitty, you are a master at this, truly a goddess walking among mortals
14th Dec 2018 4:28am
Aww, thank you love, and I do apologize I have not knocked on your door, I will tomorrow, it's late, therefore, I will bid you a goodnight and an ever better tomorrow
14th Dec 2018 5:35am
15th Dec 2018 00:19am
Aww, thank you for reading and then commenting as well. Enjoy your evening
Anonymous
14th Dec 2018 9:30am
Amazing. Apparently, at moment of my birth a storm raged. Streets outside maternity hospital were flooding. All adds up I guess. There is definitely something not of this world about rain. Is there anything as poignant, life-affirming, than a butterfly sluiced in rainfall?
15th Dec 2018 00:58am
Yes it's very life affirming in cleansing of one's soul for intellectual, emotional, physical, and spiritual rebirth. Thank you blue eyes for taking the time to read and adding a comment. Enjoy your weekend as well
14th Dec 2018 5:32pm
15th Dec 2018 00:53am
Coming from you love that means the world to me. Do enjoy your weekend as well
15th Dec 2018 4:01am
15th Dec 2018 4:33am
Thank you, and I have some free time tomorrow, I will knock on your door; I see you have been very busy as well, it will give me great pleasure to comment and let you know just how much I enjoy your works of art, Enjoy your weekend handsome
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
12th Apr 2019 1:10pm
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