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the metaphysics & politics of love doesn’t allow for any last verse in its cursed eternity
a precision plummeting
of an incisive something
your caramelized december suns
awaken my apocalyptical abyss
-cacti irises
b(l)oom black steadfast
forgetting it’s stained
self-infliction a while
something-
that streaming in chaos
imbibed as a fallen Oracle
bludgeoned to aortic strings
pulls out at ease
an uproarious Niagara
over the blurry cyanic moons
in your cratering absence
& an eruptive silence
births & dies & births & dies &...
unceasingly
the magmatic ripple,
“you never drew me in your magnetic fields
you never curled me in your cocooning holds
you never breathed me in your igniting inhale
you never fused me ever in your plasmic soul
you never shed pearls of our lurching seashell
you never…you never...”
you just have gotten petrified in fascistic dens
of your built phantasmagorical illusion
in lightyears away of ignorance
ignominiously churning out
parched skulls & sands & soul
from this rustic earth in flotation
to an eternity
of birth, full of deaths
Published 11th Dec 2018
Author's Note
a try for mcjay's 'last verse' comp.
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Anonymous
11th Dec 2018 1:11pm
This is so out there, wrapped in every angle of the human condition. You are 1 of those on here, who leave me dazzled, dizzy and ultimately, wishing I had your writing skills to spill poetry for all seasons & ages.
11th Dec 2018 7:01pm
and u leave me inspired & wordless by ur words dear poet..glad to have u in here & hope to read ur beautiful works sooner:)
11th Dec 2018 3:31pm
Very interesting piece 👏👏 i enjoyed reading this
"you just have gotten petrified in fascistic dens
of your built phantasmagorical illusion
in lightyears away of ignorance" awesome lines just awesome well done!👏👏
"you just have gotten petrified in fascistic dens
of your built phantasmagorical illusion
in lightyears away of ignorance" awesome lines just awesome well done!👏👏
11th Dec 2018 7:05pm
Glad it got ur attention, Hunterapsych. Thanks for the words & being here:) hope to read ur shares too
11th Dec 2018 9:14pm
12th Dec 2018 2:19pm
smiles :) dear Josh...yes, i needed some starkness n dramatics to the scribe, n but the title dawned on me before this need. thank u deeply fr making me feel better by ur eloquence n presence:)
12th Dec 2018 2:14am
I have never read such beautiful imagery of the eyes before - caramalized december suns. Your wordplay is exquisite, Uma.
12th Dec 2018 2:23pm
this would be one of the feedback n words from you wise adored one that i would keep forever, deep gratitude dear x:)
16th Dec 2018 6:10pm
The mental imagery you evoke is enlightening, carrying depths of meaning. Your unique ability carries a message of great insight. Wonderful alchemy. Always a pleasure to consider your ink and the spirit that moves it.
Daniel
Daniel
