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A Little Girls Heart
Coddling unfettered feelings as she unselfishly gave up her childhood, it was God's creatures that were her guiding light and from heaven were they sent
She dearly cherished the souls of all things feathered and furry; offering the peace and solicitude to help her be brave and keep her spirit gentle and aloft
Their heart beat with such a warm and comforting propensity that filled her soul with happiness, their loyalty and love was precious and truly infinite
As the world seemed too heavy; easily feeling devoid of even a smile, these souls were the only haven of hope to keep her little heart pure and tenderly soft
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She dearly cherished the souls of all things feathered and furry; offering the peace and solicitude to help her be brave and keep her spirit gentle and aloft
Their heart beat with such a warm and comforting propensity that filled her soul with happiness, their loyalty and love was precious and truly infinite
As the world seemed too heavy; easily feeling devoid of even a smile, these souls were the only haven of hope to keep her little heart pure and tenderly soft
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Published 6th Dec 2018
| Edited 27th Jan 2019
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Anonymous
6th Dec 2018 6:02am
Pandora,
That's so beautiful!
You don't have to worry about your words coming out right, they're fantastic!
I love that last line, so sweet.
Great job!
Matthew.
That's so beautiful!
You don't have to worry about your words coming out right, they're fantastic!
I love that last line, so sweet.
Great job!
Matthew.
9th Dec 2018 8:01am
Thank you so very much and especially for the add. That means A LOT! Please excuse my delayed response as I was in a funk. I'm forever grateful, truly!!!
Anonymous
9th Dec 2018 10:37am
HI Pandora,
You're welcome.
Sorry you were in a funk, me too, though, haven't been coming on much, but it was really nice to see your comment. You're sweet.
Hope you're feeling better soon. You can write anytime if you want to talk about. Take care of yourself.
Matthew.
PS. Your writing's beautiful.
You're welcome.
Sorry you were in a funk, me too, though, haven't been coming on much, but it was really nice to see your comment. You're sweet.
Hope you're feeling better soon. You can write anytime if you want to talk about. Take care of yourself.
Matthew.
PS. Your writing's beautiful.
9th Dec 2018 10:49am
Thank you. I am actually and hope you to be as well, Matthew. I appreciate such kindness and likewise to you!
Anonymous
9th Dec 2018 7:26pm
You're so nice!!
Have a great day, my friend!!
Matthew.
Have a great day, my friend!!
Matthew.
6th Dec 2018 6:38am
Reads like an epitaph or eulogy to an animal loving young female. (Some have died tragically young.)
9th Dec 2018 8:03am
Oh My, it would be my eulogy if I allowed one. It was an emotional day and all that came was a tribute to my lifesavers.
Anonymous
6th Dec 2018 10:17am
Beautiful as the soul that wrote them, these words are delicately deep, even if sad. ❤️ J
9th Dec 2018 8:06am
Thank you, J. I adore you and you do know the story behind it. Sorry for my delayed response as you know also, I was in a horrible funk. Xo!
Bravisima Pandora! I identify so well with this piece having had a special dog in my young life. Always ready with unconditional love and respect and a most trusted confidant. Thank you for stirring such sweet memories. Have you ever read the "All Creatures Great and Small" series by James Herriot? Super heart-warming and funny.
9th Dec 2018 8:10am
Hello sunshine!! I apologize for my delayed but I was quite sad so stayed away. I'm so very gracious for your praise and the add! I value your comments always..
Yes, I've read that and your mentioning makes me want to revisit ... maybe not now.;) My blessed creatures have helped me through life..literally
Yes, I've read that and your mentioning makes me want to revisit ... maybe not now.;) My blessed creatures have helped me through life..literally
