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Tanka #12 ... time...
Yes... ''time heals all wounds''...
but it's experience that gives one a sense of perspective
one of the many benefits of age
Conversely... time wounds all heels...
as Mother Nature seeks balance... we need only be patient.
but it's experience that gives one a sense of perspective
one of the many benefits of age
Conversely... time wounds all heels...
as Mother Nature seeks balance... we need only be patient.
Published 3rd Dec 2018
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3rd Dec 2018 00:24am
Yess such a great tanka👏👏 loved the message
"Conversely... time wounds all heels...
as Mother Nature seeks balance... we need only be patient." Wow phenomenal lines👏✌
"Conversely... time wounds all heels...
as Mother Nature seeks balance... we need only be patient." Wow phenomenal lines👏✌
Thank you for your critique... much appreciated... I shall try to live up to your glowing review. Ely
3rd Dec 2018 7:20pm
Took me two reads to get the 2nd half - but when I did, I saw how clever it was/is. Nice. Josh.
Thank you, Josh. Those words are especially meaningful coming from you
who set a high bar to meet...Ely
PS...sorry to be so late in replying...
My only excuse...sick at home...abed dying...of boredom...sigh...Ely
who set a high bar to meet...Ely
PS...sorry to be so late in replying...
My only excuse...sick at home...abed dying...of boredom...sigh...Ely
